To be honest, I was slightly intrigued by why the "angel" wanted to kill her and so on. This review is only based on the first chapter and it seems a bit short to me. Overall, some sound effects could be added, such as some panting while she was running, to bring this action scene to life. However, I will continue reading because I am really curious about what will happen next. I would even like to see a comic based on this story.
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LIKEFalSe_sMile:Thank you for this review. I would be happy if you continued with this story in the future. đimage