Liked how you completed the story. It give me such a good feel about everyone who was there. Sweet and loving memories.

I am looking forward to the wrap up of this story. You tie together the side stories very well. Can you show me how to link to another of your historical romance.? Would love to follow your work.

Pacing of the story involves readers. Strong transition of storyboard.

Enjoyed Ye Xin and Xiwan interaction. Makes me smile. Interesting dialogue.

This the second book I have read that could hold my interest. It is value for the money spent - light reading to relax. The storyboard did not drag or went around misc. plots

Appreciate the storyboard did not drag all over the place . However, I cannot help being jaded with the repeated and similar plot. Overall for young readers of 20 years and below - easy reading.

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From the start the opening chapter grabs one 's attention. Vivid description of characters gives them life. Pacing flow just right.

At this point your writing style and storyboard still rocks. Read two other writer's stories and was disappointed. It started as interesting then it becomes a dragging slow pacing, one's mind drifts away. Appreciate your story telling.

The characters development makes one feel the experiences as we read. The story pacing is on spot.

Accidently I notice this reading platform. Reading three different genres, and them captivating. Enjoyed the reading glow and plots.

Enjoying your story. Pacing is just right. Descriptive yet moves the flow.