Funtimealice
The mimic branch of the Maple tree Alice 
of reading
575
Read books
Capable of
Taining? It should be training
I like where the story going and thank you for writing
The starts should have a is or was before the like
Side? Do you mean size?
And remove the “to” since it becomes redundant
Cable should be capable
The sentence should be “time stop is the useful ability”
Are you trying to say that the ability can control others and can’t be broken by magic?
Broooooo
I think you may have posted this in the wrong language?
And switch red and blood it’s in wrong order so blood red eyes
And news instead of new
Shocked instead of sock
Like SAO has a lot of potential because there’s a lot of leeway because of the time skip
I am heavily interested in that idea
Misspelled done is supposed to be down
+1