SPOILER ALERT!!! It was overall good on expressing emotions and everything. The way you described how the siblings' relationship is, i remembered my own little brother. Man! Usually I'm not a person who cries over things in books or dramas. But the part you described how his brother dies, i felt like crying for real because i have a little brother who i have a big connection with. For some people it will ridiculous, having such a bond with siblings and all, but i know how it so i almost cried. The part where you said about the main character hearing thoughts, i remembered Sophie Foster😂 Ig you have inspired this character from her? Correct me if I'm wrong. Also, Riptide! Like, seriously?😂😂😂 Dude! We all know it's Percy's sword. But i have no problem with that name. It's pretty good. Overall i like this book and waiting to read more

Awesome work dude! Please continue. Wanna read more[img=update][img=recommend]