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_justumeh_

_justumeh_

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"Immersing myself in realms unknown, I am a weaver of dreams and architect of imagination. With every stroke of my pen, I conjure worlds where magic and love emmerse.

2022-08-06 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to sebastian_WN

    i have email

    Ch 1 Summoned for the seemingly small
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    Bound Hearts
    Teen · _justumeh_
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to sebastian_WN

    I have no idea on what discord is tho

    Ch 1 Summoned for the seemingly small
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    Bound Hearts
    Teen · _justumeh_
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to Faith_Andru
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    The School Heathrob's Fantasy Girl
    Teen · Faith_Andru
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to Iscream2

    Thanks 😊

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    Enchanted bonds
    Fantasy · _justumeh_
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    I love this book It's not complete yet and I'm eager to get moreee🥰. We need more chapters author 😭

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    The School Heathrob's Fantasy Girl
    Teen · Faith_Andru
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    I don't seem to understand the book because of the bad grammar but I know that our author has a great story in mind .I'm struggling to follow but I am loving the story. Please update. We need more chapters 😊❤️

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    The Secret Love has an End.
    Urban · Sophora
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to Star_Queen

    Thanks .I just uploaded more chapters 💛

    Ch 4 Chocolate shadows
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    Bound Hearts
    Teen · _justumeh_
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to Star_Queen

    You are welcome .I love the story and I anticipate the chapters to come. Drop a review on my book also. It's called bound Hearts

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    My Senior Crush
    Teen · Star_Queen
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to TefiGaby

    You're welcome. Be sure to check out my book and also review. It's name is Enchanted bonds.🧡

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    Aerumade
    Teen · TefiGaby
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to Iscream2

    OK. Please check out my book too.Enchanted bonds. It's really interesting and you can comment and review too .I would really appreciate that

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    Fated Lovers.
    Teen · Iscream2
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    Your book is not complete yet so I can't give it a complete 5 stars. I love your plot and the fact that it's a first person POV. But your synopsis is too short. It is meant to grab readers attention but it doesn't. Try to fix this and be sure to update regularly 😊👍

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    My Senior Crush
    Teen · Star_Queen
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    I didn't rate this 5 stars because it's not complete yet. Your first chapter I guess was a mistake. Try to delete it. And then your chapter 2 was was your authors note 😅.That is not supposed to be there. You could've put it in the reviews section or under your synopsis. Not there. And your use of another language.... You know that people all over the world are reading it. You may lose fans because of that and they may not understand you eh.. So you gotta do something about it. I love your book and be sure to update regularly 😊👍

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    The Girl Behind The Scenes
    Teen · Ayeesha_Gambo
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    I can't give this book 5 stars because it's not complete yet. Your chapter 1 I guess it was to grab readers attention but it didn't. It just sounded weird kinda .Overall I like the story you're trying to create. Try to make your content more... You know.... Better... With better grammar. Keep up the good work

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    Desire of Impeccable Love
    Teen · ace_hs
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    I wouldn't give this book 5 star because it is not complete. So far, the story line is okay, but your content needs work. On average when you use scroll mode to read it is 11 - 12 pages but chapter 1 was 38! You can reduce it and that can give you a whole 4 chapters. It makes people comfortable reading and like their reading progress, but If each chapter is that long, it will make reading boring and ambiguous. I love the story though... Keep it up and be sure to update regularly

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    War Of Hearts/Tom Kaulitz
    Teen · ana_chkhikvadze
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to Iscream2

    You're welcome. I also had that problem when writing mine. But what I did was to go back to the chapter and clean everything there and clicked update. I don't really remember but I solved the problem.I enjoy your book a lot and please be sure to update regularly ☺️

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    Fated Lovers.
    Teen · Iscream2
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    I have not read this yet but I don't like it already. I understand you might be a new writer. Your chapter one was welcome to create on web novel. You should probably delete that And in the next chapter, your intro about how people should support your book shouldn't be there You should've put that in the review or author's thought if you wanted that. It's not supposed to be there. TBH... I actually read the first 3 chapters and I love your story line. But once you have edited these mistakes I will be sure to read and comment on each chapter😊👍

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    Fated Lovers.
    Teen · Iscream2
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    Good book but in order to have more views you'd need a more inviting cover. This needs to be seen by the whole world babe. 😍❤️

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    Aerumade
    Teen · TefiGaby
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Posted

    Good story but I feel like it has too much content in each chapter. Why not reduce the content and spread it to have more chapters 🤔

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    The Wicked Magical Girl
    Teen · LC_Rowan
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to _justumeh_

    You have not checked out Bound Hearts. It's not complete but I update every day

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    When The Tyrant Became Obsess of the Thing Called Love
    Fantasy · Gracelline
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  • _justumeh_
    _justumeh_8mth
    Replied to Gracelline

    Okay. I just started reading your book and the story line is great 👌👍Keep up the good work

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    When The Tyrant Became Obsess of the Thing Called Love
    Fantasy · Gracelline
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