_justumeh_
"Immersing myself in realms unknown, I am a weaver of dreams and architect of imagination. With every stroke of my pen, I conjure worlds where magic and love emmerse.
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I didn't rate this 5 stars because it's not complete yet. Your first chapter I guess was a mistake. Try to delete it. And then your chapter 2 was was your authors note 😅.That is not supposed to be there. You could've put it in the reviews section or under your synopsis. Not there. And your use of another language.... You know that people all over the world are reading it. You may lose fans because of that and they may not understand you eh.. So you gotta do something about it. I love your book and be sure to update regularly 😊👍
I can't give this book 5 stars because it's not complete yet. Your chapter 1 I guess it was to grab readers attention but it didn't. It just sounded weird kinda .Overall I like the story you're trying to create. Try to make your content more... You know.... Better... With better grammar. Keep up the good work
I wouldn't give this book 5 star because it is not complete. So far, the story line is okay, but your content needs work. On average when you use scroll mode to read it is 11 - 12 pages but chapter 1 was 38! You can reduce it and that can give you a whole 4 chapters. It makes people comfortable reading and like their reading progress, but If each chapter is that long, it will make reading boring and ambiguous. I love the story though... Keep it up and be sure to update regularly
I have not read this yet but I don't like it already. I understand you might be a new writer. Your chapter one was welcome to create on web novel. You should probably delete that And in the next chapter, your intro about how people should support your book shouldn't be there You should've put that in the review or author's thought if you wanted that. It's not supposed to be there. TBH... I actually read the first 3 chapters and I love your story line. But once you have edited these mistakes I will be sure to read and comment on each chapter😊👍