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I wouldn't give this book 5 star because it is not complete. So far, the story line is okay, but your content needs work. On average when you use scroll mode to read it is 11 - 12 pages but chapter 1 was 38! You can reduce it and that can give you a whole 4 chapters. It makes people comfortable reading and like their reading progress, but If each chapter is that long, it will make reading boring and ambiguous. I love the story though... Keep it up and be sure to update regularly

War Of Hearts/Tom Kaulitz

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thank you i will do it❣️