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Grumper9mthReplied to Barbatos_3461I think I know how I am going to handle it. I have a few things that I can focus on that aren't just rewriting the events. I'll probably go to an Inari POV next chapter and have her sit down with Ochaco, it would be a good thing to write my own little scene.
A/N: I feel like my writing quality is slipping a little bit. This is probably one of my least favorite arcs that is in MHA. It just seemed to go on for a long time. Like I said last time, It'll likely be just 3 chapters but I hope the quality isn't awful. Work is going to be a long day tomorrow so I'll try to get the chapter as early as I can to you but it will likely be as late as this one was.- Grumper9mthReplied to JarOfOz
I agree. I'm going to try to keep up with my schedule till Sunday where I said I would try to double release but the last two chapters have made me realize that I need to move faster. I can jump ahead and do the things I want to do. But if not I may reduce my schedule down to focus on quality. This isn't a slice of life where I can write cutesy content like Pokemon: A life worth Living (one of my favorites rn) or even the Ginny reincarnation story. I need to focus on my direction and schedule.
A/N: I feel like my writing quality is slipping a little bit. This is probably one of my least favorite arcs that is in MHA. It just seemed to go on for a long time. Like I said last time, It'll likely be just 3 chapters but I hope the quality isn't awful. Work is going to be a long day tomorrow so I'll try to get the chapter as early as I can to you but it will likely be as late as this one was. - Grumper9mthReplied to BaaSheep123
I totally agree. I feel like if I mess with this arc, I mess with a lot. I've solved the todoroki problem already, at least in a subtle way. And I feel like I'm not writing anything new which just feels wrong. Most people aren't reading a fanfiction if they haven't seen the show or read the manga but I just don't feel like I can add anything here and it makes me feel like my writing is lackluster.
Ch 21 Chapter 19: Sports Festival Part One - Grumper9mthReplied to cafreine
Is the canon name for the Vigilante that stain was before he began killing heroes
Stendahl sheathed his sword and leaned against a chimney on the roof we were on. "I'm glad I got to meet you Kyuubi, you are maybe the only reason I haven't taken to killing certain heroes who do not deserve the title." - Grumper9mthReplied to Failure_Number9
He carried All Might on a regular basis in his training.
"No, you are going to disappear!!" She freaked out but it was too late, Toshinori rapidly turned back into a young man. His body reverted back to his prime years as a young adult. Eri's power coursed through both of them, knocking All Might out cold. With her power all exhausted she passed out as well. All Might looked like he had regained 30 years of his life. Midoriya caught both of them quickly and backed up before Chisaki could approach anymore. - Grumper9mthReplied to LilBoiaSenpai
Nope. I intend to make large changes here starting soon. Introducing villains and starting alternate plot lines begins really after the USJ
A/N: Introducing why this book has a crossover tag and the Villain I chose as her foil. I hope you enjoy the chapter. The Joker to her Batman. Evelynn has arrived. I'll leave it on the cliff for today. Thanks for reading. - Grumper9mthReplied to Failure_Number9
Fixed. Thanks for the heads up
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I will fix that. They had it pretty ambiguous in the manga for a while.
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- Grumper9mthReplied to Soal_SanCh 12 Chapter 11: Combat Training
- Grumper9mthReplied to Kiradeux
That is such a wonderful idea. I'm so happy I haven't started the chapter yet. I am so going to use this. Thank you
A/N: Next chapter will be the combat training. How do you think I should integrate her into the chapter? I kind of felt like I wanted her to help TA the class with All Might. At the same time, I feel like I should have her fight a pair of students by herself to show her skill to the class. I hope you are looking forward to the chapter. - Grumper9mthReplied to SleepySmile
Largely because it fit the idea of a hero costume the best as well as with the few tweaks I mentioned it's something a little more original.
Inside was a bodysuit that matched the details of the Challenger Ahri skin. I had changed the colors to blue and white to match my quirk, hair, and tails. I also removed the horrendous shoulder spikes in favor of small shoulder pauldrons for some protective armor. The suit was also made of my hair letting it meld into my coat when I transformed. It was a masterpiece. It felt like a second skin. I won't complain that it made me look good as well. - Grumper9mthReplied to Soal_San
I'm treating her class like a lab so that it doesn't interrupt the normal setup for a classroom. I understand that's not usually how classrooms work but I will be having like formal debate tools and podiums show up in later chapters so students can learn about special public appearances and addresses.
Soon enough the bell rang, and students shuffled to their next class. The classic Japanese bell was so much more soothing than the harsh ringing of the American school bell. - Grumper9mthReplied to Andrew_Edwards_0410
That's my literary control for the romance so I agree that's when it is going to take place.
-Katsuki Bakugo (Some of my favorite character development in the Manga) - Grumper9mthReplied to Andrew_Edwards_0410
I plan to write it close to the sports fest
"Lady Nataka, please give your absolute Plus Ultra in this fight. Part of the duty of teachers is the protection of their students. All Might is handicapped, and this test will not only give me a reasonable estimate of your abilities but also what you may be able to do for the students. You revealing the MLA to me let me rush some of my plans through the school board so students will be coming to UA as a boarding school this year." Nezu's tone was strict and lacked his usual jovial tone. "You may also see something the other teachers of UA know about but must be kept secret from anyone outside this school." - Grumper9mthReplied to Soal_San
Thanks. I'll mention it later as well but it's absolutely not late. The romance is gonna be mega slow burn
-Mezo Shoji (Because he kind of fits the image of how she was raised aka someone similar to how her father may treat her mother) - Grumper9mthReplied to JugdementCale
Thank you for posting these for me. I didn't have the time to post them before getting out to work. This is a huge help
Inside was a bodysuit that matched the details of the Challenger Ahri skin. I had changed the colors to blue and white to match my quirk, hair, and tails. I also removed the horrendous shoulder spikes in favor of small shoulder pauldrons for some protective armor. The suit was also made of my hair letting it meld into my coat when I transformed. It was a masterpiece. It felt like a second skin. I won't complain that it made me look good as well. - Grumper9mthReplied to Nyx_Alexander17
I'm glad you enjoy it. I'm enjoying writing it so ill make sure to keep it up. Thanks for your support
Modern Heroism has changed the definition of Good and Evil. The public and heroes themselves have equated the idea of Hero to Good and Villain to Evil. Quick to label anyone with a quirk into a heroic or villainous category, they have forgotten that the foremost role of a hero is to save lives. This can be done in many ways but is usually in a direct fashion. Saving people from fires, rushing people to hospitals, stopping theft in the street; each of these is seen as a heroic act if performed with the help of a quirk. It is commonly forgotten that it is the action that is performed that is the heroic thing, not the person. We hand out licenses to people and they are given the title of hero without ever actually doing any of the aforementioned things. It's the same with Villainy except in reverse.