DaoistsMUoYG
Writing
of reading
2273
Read books
Thanks for the feedback!!! Sorry about that. I'm not experienced with writing, and I just chose one of the many different ways I have seen writing. For the dialog fix, do you mean doing it like "Mother:" Jade, how are you feeling? or something like "Im home," said Jade. Let me know, and I will try and fix the problem.
It's kind of like this but with green fabric and for a woman.