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DaoistvDClLB

DaoistvDClLB

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  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Commented

    Deal's and Deal, though free sounds better XD

    Ch 14 Troubles of a Merchant
    Rise of the Looper
    Fantasy · konza
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  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Commented

    Turns out I'm gonna be the leader of the Association.

    Ch 13 The Day After
    Rise of the Looper
    Fantasy · konza
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  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Replied to somi_n

    thanks!

    Ch 10 The Reality of the Dream
    Synchronous
    Sci-fi · DaoistvDClLB
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  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Replied to konza

    I'm sure you will XD

    Rise of the Looper
    Fantasy · konza
    detail
  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Posted

    I like the concept of the existence of a parallel world with monsters in it. And also, your writing style is amazing! Looking forward to the next update!

    Rise of the Looper
    Fantasy · konza
    detail
  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Posted

    Hey, the story is great. Try working on the punctuation a bit, though. The story's theme is pretty good! I am certainly looking forward to the next update!

    Without Its Beauty
    Sci-fi · somi_n
    detail
  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Replied to Nancy_Micheal_4985

    Sure!

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  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Posted

    Hello! I think the story is good in itself, but please correct the grammatical errors and improve the writing quality! I'm looking forward to the next chapter update XD

    This book has been deleted.
  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Replied to Nancy_Micheal_4985

    thank you!

    Synchronous
    Sci-fi · DaoistvDClLB
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  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Replied to TheLastOne95

    Please take a look at the prologue again. I've changed it.

    Ch 3 Quest 0 : The recruitment
    Synchronous
    Sci-fi · DaoistvDClLB
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  • DaoistvDClLB
    DaoistvDClLB1yr
    Replied to TheLastOne95

    There are two people named Ash. One a boy, the other a girl, existing in parallel universes.

    Ch 3 Quest 0 : The recruitment
    Synchronous
    Sci-fi · DaoistvDClLB
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