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MetaQuill9mthCommentedHey there, guys! I have a very important question: How long would you like the first simulation to be? Would another 20-25 chapters be alright? Or should I make it even shorter? Or do you want me to go into full detail about this simulation world, including things like the civil war I mentioned, the power system, and maybe even some politics? However, please note that this would make it quite lengthy about 45~60 chapter. Please reply and let me know your answer.
Ch 4 Chapter 4: Simulation 1 - Who would pass up opportunities?- MetaQuill11mthReplied to Zero_Five_7869
I just wanted to make it feel natural! Also I read too many Xianxia
"Hehe, little boy, don't worry. Sister will explain everything to you later," the big wavy-haired blonde woman replied, her eyes gleaming with a hint of mischief as she shamelessly scanned Hikari's body, eliciting laughter while playfully patting the man beside her. - MetaQuill11mthReplied to Zero_Five_7869
My friend translated that :)
"You young folks have impressive mental resilience and acceptance capabilities. Unlike my generation, where several middle-aged women and men screamed and stubbornly refused to believe, almost getting themselves killed..." The big, wavy-haired woman mumbled, casting a glance at everyone. - MetaQuill11mthCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7: Contract
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Well, these few chapters are going to have a significant information dump. I have tried to make it more neat and organized, but since this is my first novel, I am still an amateur. But please read!!! And thank you for all the support you have given :)
Ch 5 Chapter 5: The Radiant Legion - MetaQuill11mthReplied to Leylin_Farlier99Ch 5 Chapter 5: The Radiant Legion
- MetaQuill1yrCommentedCh 11 Book Update: Apologies and Plans for a Mass Update
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Here Gatsūga jutsu is also know as Fang Passing Fang, I wrote Gatsūga in the novel cause it was much shorter.
"It is difficult to be sure. If you look closely, the big hole where Wolf died is very similar to that caused by the Gatsūga of the Inuzuka clan. And the damage to those big trees are also likely to be caused by the Gatsūga." - MetaQuill1yrCommented
Here I meant the B-Rank Shadow Clone Technique, not the A-rank Multiple Shadow Clone Technique.
The first difference was power; a normal clone transformed through the use of Shadow Clone Jutsu can have about 50% of the power of the main body, whereas Sasuke's blood clone can have a clone with a strength equal to the amount of G-cells supplied to the clone. For example, if Sasuke supplied enough G-cells, Sasuke could have a clone equal to his own strength.