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Duriog3mthPostedI don't normally write a review be it the best of the best books or if it's trash...but this one here is the exception...the idea is definitely great and sort of unique but the inconsistencies in this book and the overall viewpoint is beyond lackluster. Starting from the first chapter the plot holes appeared with the relationship between the two siblings...or rather now step siblings...then it's the fact that the author clearly states that this is a different world without the countries from earth so how the heck was the previous owner of the body studying Chinese history Not to mention author said its like a European setting even mentioning European buildings and all yet the high-school is Chinese name with even his sister having a Chinese name Then plot holes like what do mean the mc regretted what happened on the beach with his male friend's jewelry...u only mentioned the female girls jewelry. The u also mentioned that the mc clearly has a adult consciousness yet he gets excited due to his younger sister's body... Like really Also another thing u said there's nothing magical about this world so where the heck did qi come from and what combat techniques are needed to slap someone with twice the force...not the face slapping I had in mind... But I'm not done yet, u said the previous owner of the body died due to fever then how was he writing on a desk when mc consciousness was there prior when what looked like he was getting trashed on the floor... Atleast the interactions seem to be flowing I just remembered something...mc only got 20 dollars...yes dollars in another world within a European society that has a Chinese name and u can go to uni after middle school...so instead of gradually getting more money...he wants to directly get 5k dollars to buy something to get more points...not to mention using all that 20 he had as bribary, yet not wanting to spend 5 on buying milk...not to mention the poor condition of his family Oh and BTW I still never get to ch20...so yeah...enjoy...im out.
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Just another "almost" shameless author review hereInstead of giving reasons why you should give my book a chance, I'll let you guys decide that.So feel free to ask any questions here. I would also be absolutely grateful for any criticism as u believe it will ultimately help me grow as a reader.So then I hope u enjoy my book[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
- Duriog1yrCommented
yeah sorry but no an app is not an application, dats 2 different things altogether, apps are intended to run on mobile devices while applications are intended to be run on computing devices such as laptops
App or otherwise known as an application, is a software. They usually refer to the usable software on an iPhone or an Android phone. - Duriog1yrReplied to Humbl3noob
yeah sorry but no an app is not an application, dats 2 different things altogether, apps are intended to run on mobile devices while applications are intended to be run on computing devices such as laptops
App or otherwise known as an application, is a software. They usually refer to the usable software on an iPhone or an Android phone. - Duriog1yrReplied to AnnoyedReader
yeah sorry but no an app is not an application, dats 2 different things altogether, apps are intended to run on mobile devices while applications are intended to be run on computing devices such as laptops
App or otherwise known as an application, is a software. They usually refer to the usable software on an iPhone or an Android phone. - Duriog1yrCommentedCh 57 A creative punishment
- Duriog1yrCommented
I actually prefer it this way since it's different from the normal approach also don't worry too much as long as you write what you want to write
[A/N: Okay, okay. I've noticed a lot and by a lot I mean a lot of people are not liking that Zero revealed that he's a reincarnate to Anya, and honestly, I'd never thought it'll be this bad. I mean, it was a good idea when I thought of it and it still is; the reader who'd not dropped the novel because of this and has read further already knows. - Duriog1yrCommented"Miss. Princess! It's…ah, I don't know how to respond. It's a pleasure to meet you," he said, even though he tried to stay calm it was clear as cum that he was still panicking.
- Duriog1yrCommentedCh 246 No One Except for Arkhen!
- Duriog1yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1 - Who am I
- Duriog1yrReplied to Zerin_LeeCh 29 Chapter 27: Getting the oranges (I).
- Duriog1yrCommentedCh 29 Chapter 27: Getting the oranges (I).
- Duriog1yrCommented
Hi, I was wondering whether I could continue your discontinued novel "Ice queen in another world". I found it really interesting and I would love to see it completed so if you don't mind then it would be an honor to complete it. [img=update]
Ch 29 Chapter 27: Getting the oranges (I).