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- petar_vincic10mthCommentedCh 81 A New Encounter.
- petar_vincic1yrCommentedCh 80 Relocation.
- petar_vincic1yrReplied to PeaofLife
Seraph of the end or something like that
It might have a positive effect that he might receive more support from the sect or might have a negative effect since the sect would see him like a prodigy that might put him in unnecessary spotlight which could get him in some trouble. Even if he wanted to disclose his cultivation he first had to get his crane sword skill to level 4, then even at level one cultivation with the help of technique he could fight a cultivator of the foundation realm. - petar_vincic1yrCommented
Should have 0.5 more
»Constitution: 12 - petar_vincic1yrCommented
Caps for the name of the city
The carriage continued its journey all day. The next morning, they reached the Soaring Mountain Range. Han Cai could see a massive mountain range ahead with lush greenery. The air felt twice as fresh compared to his home in the eagle trail town. When they reached the bottom of one of the hills in the mountain range, they saw a massive gate with a Crane and clouds carved on it. Below it was written Soaring Sky Sect. There were few guards at the gate, and they were dressed in black and red uniforms. When they saw an elder in the carriage, they allowed the carriages to pass through the gates. - petar_vincic1yrPosted
Now hear me out. Like any other 'Lord novel' there are plot holes ans shalow characters and ofcourse out beloved people from DEAGON country aka(isnert the country we all think it is) . In the beggining the novel was even sexist and I was like wtf but I didnt have anything smarter to do so i keept reading. The sexist thing soon became less obvious so thats one less problem. There are certan typing errors but as english is not my first lenguage its not soo bad i cant keep reading. But if u came to to read a lighthearted lord novel I think its one of the best(Best among the worst not some achivment). Soo all in all u eather like it or hate it to the core.
- petar_vincic1yrPosted
The theme is good but are u for real a two year old going and killing, okey i understand its cultivation they develop faster no big deal , but oh boy the writing is terrible. Like a good third of sentances are butcherd and dont make any sense. I forced myself to get to premium chapters in hope author got sober but it just got worse. If this novel gets edited to look like some decent art u can coment soo i come back becose as I said the theme is interesting but before that i hope i can forget what I have read.
- petar_vincic1yrPosted
All in all the story is good. There aren't grammer mistakes or if there are the author corects them. The writing is pretty good and u can read the story in one sitting if u have that much time. You feel like you would like more chapters not like u NEED more chapters if you get what i mean. All in all give it a try becose u would probably like it.
- petar_vincic1yrReplied to Necsys_Coldheart
I think everyone who read this paraghraf remebered this legendery meme
"Where's the money!? Huh? Where's the money you bastard!?" Some big bellied man who looks like all he does is eat roadside fried food and drink beer kept asking the boy, but never got a response.