CetusWritings
I am an author that loves toast đ You can never have too many novels! it's true check out how many original works I have đ
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He is also the God of Mimicry from my research, most Gods have other titles other than their main ones that they are known about
[img=Speechless] Sorry to hear that but I am trying to improve my writing style since it has been one of the main things that people have said about my works, so make sure to continue reading if I actually ever improve, also I am wondering what you think about the story and other parts other than than writing quality?
Welp, I completely forgot about that ability while I was writing, thanks for reminding me of this, I'll be adding it back in with some nerfs for ya
The writing quality itself could be better in a few ways like fixing a few grammar mistakes here and there with also some extra spaces being used in a few of the paragraphs but the usage of words are definitely good. The story development seems a bit slow paced as to how I see it, but I am used to fast pace but I don't know myself but France is definitely having a hard time with Noelle's body and it also seems that the others characters in the story don't trust Noelle with even a single droplet which makes it hard for future development. The rest like character design and world background is pretty well made, there are a lot of descriptions for each character and the world around France/Noelle and over all the novel is great and if you want to pass the time this is a novel you should definitely read.
My sources are incorrect, I'll change it later, me too lazy now [img=Good night]
Most people around the world have an average score of 130 IQ and so 139 IQ is just a bit above average not enough to be declared a genius :)
Uhh, I'll rewrite that don't worry
Wdym? it's right there, "Undead's Ruler"
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