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i know, i just pointed out the inner monologues (it was more of a rant of mine) because the pacing of the history its so slow in terms of timeline and its hard for the mc to have a transformation in his bases (like skills with his spear and the like and not in terms of power) i have read so many times xianxia novels where 4k chapters and just 2 years happen in the history that i came here and let it out in your novel, when i saw the similarity, i apologize for my comment before that sounds so much like hate. my rating was 3.8 just that the platform displays it at 3 stars anyway i will continue reading im still in chapter 171 ii like the history but it always irks me more the pacing of things than the personality of the mc or any other thing XD

the history its great i like the mc, like the secondary characters, and like the world building in general but the thing that i don´t like it´s the pace of the history we got a massive amount of events (i am in chapter 171) in a short amount of time, 170 chapters and we are just 3 weeks in-game and 1 IRL it its a problem because the mc has no time to train his abilities, its the way that the author its using to make the op mc less op but its frustrating that everything its going to fast i feel like im reading a xianxia novel where the mc goes for a 5k chapters and just 2 years passed story wise we are told that the mc has a lot of stats but cant usse them cause he has no control but the mc has not been give the time to train its annoying another thing its that the mc has a lot of inner monologues that easily can be brushed over and does not affect the history easily 10 chapters (till 171) are monologues of the mc that has no relevant purpose i like the history, but for me it does not deserve the rating that it has

so no more snu snu to deal with the stress?

i want a PAN user mc

its good, the final part wass a bit rushed but it was better that way, the plot was starting tobecoming boring, and it was hard keep tabs on the heroines, at the final chapter he had like 37 wives and another bunch of maids, but the novel was interesting, the only thing i didnt like its that its a MTL but you can read up to 150 chaps in others places

this family really its special

the thing i like about his cultivation method its that there is a need to develop felings between each other

ok, that was unexpected

i like that pair of father and mother

i almost forgot who she was

neither does a man like violence, if it is in a sport its ok, but nobody likes that type of violence, well just a few people with loose screws, : 1

I'm putting 5 stars because i don't want to get my comment deleted (just the 4 and 5 stars comments are here) 4.8 stars ? It's suspicious This history begins with a solid 5 stars Bue after the first continent all begins to go downhill the arc of the 2nd continent its a 3.5, and the 3rd continent its a fcking 1 star All begins to get boring, the mc it's still in the core formation realm after 300 chapters and even then we still are in the lower realms and the lower levels of cultuvation Everithing went downhill real fas since the mc stopped growing He has the experience to enter the high levels of cultuvation real fast thanks to his connection to the celestial realm but this author makes him spend his time in some bullshit competition that gives him no benefits whatsoever Anyway this novel went from a masterpiece to a total trash cultuvation novel that the author want to prolong to get coins from his readers If the history gets better just reply to my comment : |

The Mc its so fcking naive that gives you cringe You might think that for someone ghat has been suffering for like 10 years he will be able to analyze his situation and want to have some self-improvement but no The mc its the same fucking naive shit even when his enemies tried to kill him multiple times And his dialoges with every character specialy with de female ones are so cringeworthy The mc its still alive thanks to the plot armor that makes him always stronger than his enemies And his background ( the gramps and his "future lovers" that always are there to intimidate the elders ) I already dropped this thing 2 times

After the chapter 530s when the tower of babylon ark its a lot of fillers chapters Ghe only ones are the floors 21-30 and the rest are fillers that you can skip and you wont miss anything of importance Also the chapters of the first world games you can also skip them only read the chapter named "Raid" where Draco train his guildmembers All other chapters arent needed If you want to read'em i recommend you to read in another website where you dont waste coins More than 200 filler chapters : | 4 stars because i dont want my comment to get deleted xd

The first few chapters are so cringe worthy that i dropped the history Another thing that i dont like its the description of the MC ("average looks", height 1.75m) Fck why do the authors like doing the mcs average looking Its already a fantasy novel why do you not put a mc with "fantasy" looks If u want your mc to be relatable with your readers the worst thing that you can do its that your mc its average or plain ugly. Nobody likes being related with the word "ugly" or "average" in a world ruled by appareances. A plain MC with a bad personality (or stupid) its the best combo that you can have for me to drop the novel immediately

Why do the authors always make the systems abilities without any memories or the like for the mc (like if you put an + point in the ice bullet you get memories of how the ice is made, control of mana etc; or if you get abilities of masterie like spear mastery, sword, ice magic, you get the actual mastery over that) The mc its actually a stupid and talentless bstard without his system If someone were to ask the mc about magic he would know nothing

I would like for the author to publish more chapters of the life of the secondary characters Like little flame, Qian zheng, Li Zixia, Xia girl (the one in the same dormitory with the mc) and the more of the friends of the mc and ml And chapters of the marriage and kids of Xue Xi and the Gigolo

I fkng love this novel Even thought it has 909 chapters i never got bored of the history Although it would have been better if the history had like 20 more chaps because the author didnt present us the wedding and the kids but overall i loved the novel I am an avid reader with more than 600 novels of experience but this one its in my top 5

i dont get it when you guys complain about the yuri stuff, if you cant dedciate your time to a girl then dont expect the same for her, the mc is just a horny guy who likes to f*ck a lot, he doesnt love the girls so it isnt suprising tha the girls seek pleasure and warm in another person it wouldnd have been surprising if the girls leave the mc and go separate ways, when all the mc is have s*x with them and nothing more, for me the girls should just stop seeing the mc and have fun by themselves.