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the history its great i like the mc, like the secondary characters, and like the world building in general but the thing that i don´t like it´s the pace of the history we got a massive amount of events (i am in chapter 171) in a short amount of time, 170 chapters and we are just 3 weeks in-game and 1 IRL it its a problem because the mc has no time to train his abilities, its the way that the author its using to make the op mc less op but its frustrating that everything its going to fast i feel like im reading a xianxia novel where the mc goes for a 5k chapters and just 2 years passed story wise we are told that the mc has a lot of stats but cant usse them cause he has no control but the mc has not been give the time to train its annoying another thing its that the mc has a lot of inner monologues that easily can be brushed over and does not affect the history easily 10 chapters (till 171) are monologues of the mc that has no relevant purpose i like the history, but for me it does not deserve the rating that it has
Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)
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A story can be good even if it has monologues, it just means its good in one way, there are dozens of 4 star stories out there and there is no formula for them to be or deserve 4 stars, that is merely something the readers define. I do understand the concern of the time we took, but we simply do a lot of things and despite there being a lot of "meaningless monologue" as you said, I think you're misplacing things. If every chapter we have 100 words of meaningless monologue spread out throughout it, then that's 10K words in 100 chapters, which is around 6-7 chapters, however, what is 100 words in a chapter? Nothing, so trying to come with those numbers means nothing at all. I could say I spend 300 words describing things such as feelings, emotions, envryoments, every chapter, but when you read it, they pass by as natural because it helps you immerse and understand what you're reading, so pooling up those numbers together won't do much to prove a point aside from making future readers skeptical about the novel
i know, i just pointed out the inner monologues (it was more of a rant of mine) because the pacing of the history its so slow in terms of timeline and its hard for the mc to have a transformation in his bases (like skills with his spear and the like and not in terms of power) i have read so many times xianxia novels where 4k chapters and just 2 years happen in the history that i came here and let it out in your novel, when i saw the similarity, i apologize for my comment before that sounds so much like hate. my rating was 3.8 just that the platform displays it at 3 stars anyway i will continue reading im still in chapter 171 ii like the history but it always irks me more the pacing of things than the personality of the mc or any other thing XD
Follower_of_Abadom:A story can be good even if it has monologues, it just means its good in one way, there are dozens of 4 star stories out there and there is no formula for them to be or deserve 4 stars, that is merely something the readers define. I do understand the concern of the time we took, but we simply do a lot of things and despite there being a lot of "meaningless monologue" as you said, I think you're misplacing things. If every chapter we have 100 words of meaningless monologue spread out throughout it, then that's 10K words in 100 chapters, which is around 6-7 chapters, however, what is 100 words in a chapter? Nothing, so trying to come with those numbers means nothing at all. I could say I spend 300 words describing things such as feelings, emotions, envryoments, every chapter, but when you read it, they pass by as natural because it helps you immerse and understand what you're reading, so pooling up those numbers together won't do much to prove a point aside from making future readers skeptical about the novel