author deletes bad comments- check bad grammar- check unnecessarily emo and angsty mc- check incest harem 🤮🤮- check op mc that only faceslaps- check female characters that act like a discord mods fantasy- check would give this negative stars if I could ps- If you delete this you proved my point

yipee

btw small nitpick but I couldnt understand his father since the translation was in the comments and I downloaded the book 💀

damn is this good, wasnt expecting this from 500k< views. Undderated gem frfr. Book will probably blow up in a few more days/weeks considering its only been out for a bit. Keep going author!

another webnovel destroyed by gender bending addicts, seek help actually

Omniverse would include us

Good novel and if you finish windbreaker I hope you do Irl quest or lookism next……………………………………..hehehshshjaiajdhsiabuwjfnjdiajwhwiqjbwjwjdjdnjd

Same vibes

The one that gets a gf out of nowhere for comedic timing

Im not a expert but im pretty sure most of them are

This isnt even madara, its more like a person with madaras looks and abilities and why tf does he join luffys crew as always, it doesnt even make sense

This is a great fic with great potential imo, if you just keep adding the story with fresh ideas and no ntr or harem then this story would be perfect. df fruit and stuff also very creative good job author 👍 Ps:more chap pls this fic great

When will you accept the name ben dover instead of alternate ren. PS:Ben is better

Whole thing is just my vampire system but a bit of tweaks its more of a mvs remake or fanfiction of anything like down to the setting of the book with the super fighter arcade machines to the antagonists and fucking Vorden Blade and the other kid that acts like peter is the same even the systsem prompt with the 5 xp for drinking water and the light related debuff is the same

Vorden blade 💀

No No he is saying hunger for revenge and power not power

Its still seeing a superhero irl

Bro no one here is complaining

If mihawk was black it would be low diff for zoro