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LoserIam5hCommentedCh 58 Chapter Fifty-eight: Encounters.- LoserIam1dCommentedCh 271 Chapter 271: Fish-Man Island
- LoserIam1dCommented
Take the territory for himself maybe? I don't see why he would though other than to spite the emperors
"Hahaha, Big Mom pirates? Fuck that little girl, I want to meet them." Declared Diddy with a massive grin as his entire body twitched in excitement. - LoserIam1dCommented"Captain is 15, Trenza; he can say that as the little girl, Shirahoshi, is 14; as for you, you're 28." Said Sebas, his words causing Trenza to flinch as she glanced at Diddy before awkwardly coughing and walking away.
- LoserIam1dPosted
So this is how the novel is right now. Writing quality: 5.0 Few grammar and spelling mistakes if any at all. Story Development: 4.0 While reading I don't get bored at all, but the story isn't big enough to earn more points in that area. Character design: 3.0 As I said earlier, the story hasn't given enough details about it's characters for me to give any more points. Updating stability: 4.0 At the moment it has been only four days since he last updated, so I can't say that the story is dropped or that it is inconsistent or slow. World background: 5.0 For now, since the world is the Monster Verse and he hasn't shown much in the two chapters I have read.
- LoserIam1dReplied to Blaulich161It was really a mystery to Starfall why did they only marry in the show after Twilight became an adult...
- LoserIam1dReplied to DRAGO
I don't want to be that guy but
His magic finally caught up with Twilight's in quantity, and he was almost certain that he knew how to release his magical core. His understanding of the magic language also improved but it was a really tiring process as the language was much more complicated than the 26 lettered English alphabet or the 31 lettered Ponish alphabet that included also five completely different types of 'neigh'... - LoserIam2dReplied to yagami_voidCh 1 Chapter 1
- LoserIam2dCommented
I see, she will bear witness to is powers
Azrael was intrigued, and wanting to play a little, he gave Isabella an idea: "I will go to the Great Red Desert; if you wish, you may come with me." - LoserIam2dCommented"Son of a Bitch." Muttered Shakky lightly as she gazed at what was previously her restaurant, only to glance at Diddy, who was flying away with Trenza.
- LoserIam2dCommented
Sure he isn't exactly immune, but he can control enough to not harm him.
Without any sudden warning, Shakky's rip-off bar was suddenly engulfed in a massive lightning bolt that burned and destroyed everything; the lightning persisted for several seconds, ensuring that nothing was left behind. While this was happening, I was in the middle, bathing in the destructive lightning I had summoned from Nimbus; I wasn't immune to lightning attacks like Enel, so it stung pretty bad, but it wouldn't cause any serious injury. - LoserIam2dCommented"To piss him off, of course." Remarked Diddy with a feral grin, his words confusing Shakky, only for her to suddenly widen her eyes while looking at the ceiling before crossing her arms.
- LoserIam3dCommented"G-Give me a minute; you can't expect me to just get up after you went so wild on me." Muttered Trenza softly as she slowly exited the hammock while putting on her clothes.
- LoserIam3dCommented
?
The redhead woman was right behind him, matching his every move with precision and skill. - LoserIam3dReplied to Eruvadhor
2 hours actually
He wouldn't have been in such a tension if the SHIELD had surrounded him some other day. As now his Chakra Reserves were not even half filled. He had used considerable amount of Chakra while fighting Abomination. - LoserIam3dCommented
How?
As he reappeared in a different spot using his Body Flicker Technique, he barely had time to catch his breath before another projectile came hurtling towards him. With the Abomination's astonishing precision, it seemed as though it could predict his movements. Harry once again moved to a different location. - LoserIam4dReplied to Ozonelayer
Or maybe it was the wrong novel
"Hoho, no need to look at us like that; I'd prefer not to mention the loss of my daughter's purity." "I don't really care either way." Remarked Sebas and Mael, respectively, as they glanced at Trenza before looking at Diddy, who clicked his tongue before leaning back and nodding - LoserIam4dReplied to
the "", "" instead of "."
"Hoho, no need to look at us like that; I'd prefer not to mention the loss of my daughter's purity." "I don't really care either way." Remarked Sebas and Mael, respectively, as they glanced at Trenza before looking at Diddy, who clicked his tongue before leaning back and nodding - LoserIam4dCommentedCh 268 Chapter 268: Setting Sail!
- LoserIam4dCommented
You followed my advice 👍
"Hoho, no need to look at us like that; I'd prefer not to mention the loss of my daughter's purity." "I don't really care either way." Remarked Sebas and Mael, respectively, as they glanced at Trenza before looking at Diddy, who clicked his tongue before leaning back and nodding