Thanks alot your comment drives me

very nice i must say the way the author narrates scenes is so nice like when the man that was telling the little children stories suddenly transformed the detailing is top notch

yes its goes like Alpha omega and beta the lowest

i have only read a few chapters of this book and i am wowed i am already hooked would recommend mind this book to anyone who wants a good read

i must say even the name itself is very intriguing, the way this book is written is very superb very easy to undertand and follow the story kudos to the author

i think using saying instead of said would be a better option

well the story is definrtly intriging, the writing is simple and very much understandable but as the previous comment have said you are really overusing the full stop other than that its a good read

a blood swipe is a basic vampire skill which let's them release an aura of blood in form of a cresent swipe

thanks

thanks for your review details of skills and abilities will be explaied properly in coming chapters

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okay thanks for your honest review

thanks alot, i really appreciate it

its a nice thing you got going on here i personally like the way you describe and narrate it makes the story flow smoothly and it makes it so much easier to understand

Thanks forr your honest review i will try my best to improve on it

well its my author review here no body is perfect so if you like it add it to your library and leave a review if you dont fine it's okay with me, honestly its my first time uploading my work online so be honest with your review

nice

thanks alot

well i will do my best