Thanks man, I’v been struggling to write lately but I think I’m gonna try harder now. You gave me spirit

Your writing style is INCREDIBLY descriptive I'm honestly jealous. If I had the talent you have for being discriptive I would die of happiness bro. I don’t even like romcoms that much but I was more impressed by your writing style

This is a dropped story^

This is adropper story

I only read the first chapter but Your writing style is very unique and immersive I also didn’t notice any serious grammatical errors I feel like you could’ve done just a tad bit better at the beginning very confusing for abit. Overall pretty good tho

Great chapter bro, keep on writing

Great for the first chapter, keep up the hard work popystyko I’l be here to watch you become na amazing author :) keep up the good luck bro

SHAMELESS AUTHOR REVIEW. Since I am the author I decided to give myself 5 stars, and I will also be answering any questions you guys have :)

Honestlly the novel took me by surprisee. Youur story is very unique for being an isekai. Fight scenes are discriptive from what you’v shown so far. But I just can’t stand themain character. Hopefully you make him have a serious development. I also only noticed a few amount of grammar mistakes. But it did feel abit confusing at times. Especially how he was suddenly back in limbo? You didn’t describe. How he was suddenly back. But overall it seems really good. :)

He better not ruin this novel with harem

I really enjoyed the beginning chapters. i normally don’t enjoy systems but it definitely sounds good so far. I hope you focus more on the world building. And you did good at conveying emotions