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Robert_Tene_5577

Robert_Tene_5577

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2022-06-17 JoinedGlobal
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Replied to EIo_Police

    yeah i dropped this due to thw horruble 3rd grade grammar. theres a decent story behind that soup of letters but i wont decode this shit.

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    Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Replied to jdbeue

    Hey man! Is ther a discord group for this that we could join?

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    World Online
    Games · jdbeue
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Posted

    This is truly well written. I've binged this all in one day (all 240 chapters) and I am truly impressed. It reminded me of reincarnation of the strongest swordsman, but it was all so much better. The arc for the Roman Empire and the character of Nolan was super well written. Please dont drop this author. This is incredibly good and I have a good feeling that it will blow up in no time!

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    World Online
    Games · jdbeue
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Replied to Blizzard54k

    Hey Blizzard! Is there a discord group we can join? I want to contribute (proofread/fix some gramatical errors) to this novel. The story is very great and it's a shame to see the quality of the first chapters so low compared to the later ones (grammar wise, not story wise). Do let me know if there's a discord group (or your discord) I can get a hold of.

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    Strongest Mage with the Lust system
    Fantasy · Blizzard54k
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Commented
    Immediately after he made the guild though, Jake had to go house hunting. He knew that real estate was going to boom after a month, so he had to buy early.
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    World Online
    Games · jdbeue
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Commented

    What a lack of a reaction. Her son just took them from the slums into the a super house and that's all she says? Author, this is pretty badly written.

    "You... you got this house, Jake?" Lydia stuttered. She understood that there was a house in star three that was now theirs, but everyone thought that it was the cheapest one. Not this!
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    World Online
    Games · jdbeue
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Replied to poor_soul

    Super confusing to have both "body cultivation" and "mana cultivation" . Author made the system stats too complex imho.

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    Supreme Harem God System
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Replied to SleepDeprivedSloth

    Hi @SleepDeprivedSloth ! Is there a discord group for this? Would love to join!

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    Supreme Harem God System
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Posted

    Overall a pretty enjoyable novel. It combines the elements of dual cultivation and levelup systems very well. The only negative thing about this is that sometimes the writer has bad grammar and misspells some words, but overall it is quite enjoyable and if you're willing to overlook that then you will love this novel!

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    Strongest Mage with the Lust system
    Fantasy · Blizzard54k
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Posted

    Pretty great take on a transmigration that deals with going into a villain's role. The author handed the elements pretty well and personally managed to hook me from the first chapter. Currently on chapter 10. Waiting for more ~

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    Novel Journey
    Fantasy · The_Swimming_Moon
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Posted

    The pacing is horrendous. MC literally gets stuck at level 50 (second order barrier) for over 700 chapters. It stops being "litrpg" and have any sort-of power progression from that point on. Dropped it due to that,.

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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Robert_Tene_5577
    Robert_Tene_55771yr
    Replied to Bugg

    the author and editor sometimes come up with these ilogical abominations. get used to it if u plan on reading this

    Umu, I nod at myself satisfied, and I smiled a little when I saw the customers look at the shocked cat.
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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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