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UnKnownEntity001

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Discord: UnKnownEntity#0001 Just a dude writing his first 2 novels

2022-06-18 JoinedUnited States
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to Sli_Vinos

    The romance.

    Ch 2 What I want [MC]
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    Evolution Of A Beetle To The Peak
    Fantasy · Sli_Vinos
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Commented

    This chapter was rough to read. I think I threw up a bit.

    Ch 2 What I want [MC]
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    Evolution Of A Beetle To The Peak
    Fantasy · Sli_Vinos
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to verytired

    Any sort of kingdom building? Romance?

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    Reborn as a Vessel
    Fantasy · verytired
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to verytired

    Villain, anti-hero or hero?

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    Reborn as a Vessel
    Fantasy · verytired
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to Rqmk

    Nevermind I saw the #kingdom building at the end of the synopsis.

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    Reborn as a Beastman with a System
    Fantasy · Rqmk
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to Rqmk

    Kingdom building?

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    Reborn as a Beastman with a System
    Fantasy · Rqmk
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to Rqmk

    Villain, anti-hero or hero?

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    Reborn as a Beastman with a System
    Fantasy · Rqmk
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to bearateme_

    Yike ima have to pass on this novel then. Best of luck though.

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    Death God's System
    Fantasy · bearateme_
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to Idk_1103

    Maybe you only get to reincarnate once and he doesn’t want to risk it.

    There were even several races that gave karma instead of costing karma, some of those races were house fly + 1000 karma and beetle + 350 karma. Most of them were some sort of weak and small animals.
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    Reincarnated as a Lizard
    Fantasy · PurpleSpring
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to Danish_Ahmad_Khan

    If undead such as is wraiths are going to play a large part in the story then yes use the undead tag.

    Ch 2 The Gathering Storm
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    The Revenge Of The Fallen
    Fantasy · Danish_Ahmad_Khan
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Commented

    Again tags. Add the UNDEAD tag

    Ch 2 The Gathering Storm
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    The Revenge Of The Fallen
    Fantasy · Danish_Ahmad_Khan
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Commented

    Author are you so lazy that you can’t even add tags to your story? Is it action and adventure? Is the mc a villain, anti-hero or hero? Is there a system? Is there romance? If readers see a story with no tags they are likely just going to move on without giving it a chance.

    Ch 1 The Echoes of the Past
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    The Revenge Of The Fallen
    Fantasy · Danish_Ahmad_Khan
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0011d
    Replied to bearateme_

    How much of the story is academy focused? I personally have no interest in reading about school life. It’s usually filled with unnecessary drama.

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    Death God's System
    Fantasy · bearateme_
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0012d
    Replied to TheLostBoy

    Yeah I get that. Was just hoping we would see some change in the mcs mentality, even small changes.

    Ch 37 Greenland
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    My Death Sentence
    Action · TheLostBoy
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0012d
    Commented

    So the mc has no control over literally anything??

    Ch 44 Global Announcement
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    My Death Sentence
    Action · TheLostBoy
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0012d
    Commented

    What is with all these †symbols? Really breaking the immersion when there is multiple per paragraph.

    Ch 42 Pyramid of Giza
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    My Death Sentence
    Action · TheLostBoy
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0012d
    Replied to TheLostBoy

    Yes. 1/5 stars don’t recommend. 1 star only because of the sexy succubi.

    'Hell has seasons?' 
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    My Death Sentence
    Action · TheLostBoy
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0012d
    Commented

    My issue so far with the story is it’s tagged as villain but the mc seems more of an anti-hero to hero. Nothing truly villainous, helping people and not really getting anything in return.

    Ch 37 Greenland
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    My Death Sentence
    Action · TheLostBoy
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0012d
    Commented

    I kinda like the admiral ngl, sure he’s a jerk and sometimes cowardly. But dude knows what he wants and will do anything to get it. Which I can respect.

    Ch 30 Black Pyramid’s Gate
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    My Death Sentence
    Action · TheLostBoy
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  • UnKnownEntity001
    UnKnownEntity0012d
    Commented

    So dude isn’t actually a villain, it’s the system twisting his words to make him seem evil. Well that’s disappointing. I like the concept of different types of souls though. It’s hilarious though that the admiral says the blue devils don’t have souls and then immediately suggests sacrificing one’s soul lol.

    Ch 19 Blackjack
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    My Death Sentence
    Action · TheLostBoy
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