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DaoistvZHdIQ28dReplied to ObamaUchihadid I need you to ask? :v
(A/n: Yea. Their house's business is about forging steel into weapons and armors. Their unique deviant is creating metals, steel. And the bonds between the members(kins) are as strong as steel.)- DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to MrFoolishReader
good luck for the rewrite
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welp, been a month and still no answer, but I guess you just scrapped the whole thing to rewrite lol:V
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thanks for pointing it out
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oh yeah, my bad, I will fix it
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I'm chill, I just want to make it clear for readers to understand the context:v. No harsh meanings here.
"Now, your conjurer skills are executed flawlessly even though you're an augmenter. Your polearm skills are formidable and efficient in terms of both speed and power. Solid yellow, dual elemental of earth and fire. I believe it's reasonable to place you at a solid A rank." - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to ObamaUchiha
near the end of the battle, Kaspian was going to use "Skyfall Torrent", Vigor reverse-gripped his spear as he prepared to launch the spear towards Kaspian. That's literally how people throw spears/javelins in real life, so idk what you are trying to argue:vvv? You sure you don't smoke anything high as well mate?
"Now, your conjurer skills are executed flawlessly even though you're an augmenter. Your polearm skills are formidable and efficient in terms of both speed and power. Solid yellow, dual elemental of earth and fire. I believe it's reasonable to place you at a solid A rank." - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to ObamaUchiha
he was about to throw it at Kaspian's head. Are the paragraphs' contexts hard for you to comprehend ????
"Now, your conjurer skills are executed flawlessly even though you're an augmenter. Your polearm skills are formidable and efficient in terms of both speed and power. Solid yellow, dual elemental of earth and fire. I believe it's reasonable to place you at a solid A rank." - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to ObamaUchiha
don't blame me, the OG novel's Author described her like that, so I just copy pasted it right here and changed nothing :v. Another term was used called "small lips".
Kathyln….let out a small giggle as she covered her petite mouth to hide it. - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to Canine_9_6438
oh, right, you just made a spoiler lol:V
However, I wasn't going limit myself at only swordmanship. Hell no, I wanted to be as effective as possible, to be flexible enough to use all types of weapons flawlessly and effectively. - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to Laplace_Knight
he will be anything that is practical lol.
Among the melee weapons, spear was the one I found the most trust worthy. Long range, straight and accurate strikes, minimum movements and efforts required to approach th target. And it's also quite flexible as I could throw it as a projectile. - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to Laplace_Knight
nah, those big round eyes make him look too childish and feminine, but thanks for your share of AI art. Although I'm not a fan of AI art :v
I had fair skin which I inherited from my mother with a not too sharp, firm face. Under my thin black eye brows are my gemstone green eyes exactly like my father. Turning to my hair ,it was black and uniquely messy styled with long spikes that jut out around my head. - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to Laplace_Knight
Rinia asked for it, and only she will be shocked and wondering about that statement coming from him,. She can try to prove it otherwise by using her foresight, but it will be utterly useless as she would only see him speaking the truth, soon she will just ditch the thoughts about it from her head for most of the time, and to be honest, she has no reason to tell other people about it lol. But, I will exploit more things about it and also Vigor(Erik)'s past via their conversation
Ch 14 Chapter 13 - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to ObamaUchiha
I checked google,it's "curtsy", thank you for the information :D
She extented her hand out for a handshake.....quite opposite of what noble ladies had to do during a formal greeting/introduction: bow your head down slightly as both your hands also picked up your dress slightly as well and crossed your legs. - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to ArdaPendragonCh 14 Chapter 13
- DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to ArdaPendragon
"He didn't gain anything.", um well, besides her trust lol? And as he cooperates with Rinia, he will gain multiple helps from a Diviner and other things which I don't want to spoil. Reading comprehension is quite a challenge , I guess. "I don't care if you change your mind or not....", ummm, alright, I didn't ask for you to care either. 🤷
Ch 14 Chapter 13 - DaoistvZHdIQ1mthReplied to ArdaPendragonCh 14 Chapter 13
- DaoistvZHdIQ1mthCommented
......a reader of TBATE couldn't use the right term in the novel, which is "augmenter"?????
The enhancers are more common among warriors who use mana, channeling it through their bodies to strengthen themselves and their attacks. I hoped to awaken as an enhancer.