I like how the MC is funny.But now he is grown I think you should make him mature and calm personality overall the story is good. I appreciate your hard work I am also happy to see sword master youngest son fanfiction and I plead to you not to drop this fanfiction

Yes I think you should have him a trait like cold blooded from second like ranker.It helped the MC of that novel a lot

I think our MC Magnus could use a trait a reward like cold blooded trait.Which would also help in his character development Its'sj ust a recommendation

I think our MC could use some character development Its'snot I dont like the mc.But he is too childish.I think he should be a litltlecopd blooded