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2022-06-04 JoinedPhilippines
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Replied to ARMENDMAR

    I'm sorry for that. Thank you for pointing out things I have to improve on. To answer your question. Yes, it is the same world. What happened in the cell after would be explained later on.

    Ch 7 Ờ̶̙̻̣̳̀̓̈́͌̅̃̐͌͒̑̂ͅp̴̡̢̢͍̩̘̯̗̅͑͂͂̒̇͛̚̕̚͜͜ḩ̷̛̖̖͎͍̠͔̟̝͓́̅̿́̈́̑̔̎͘͜͝e̸̢̡͓̠͋̊̾̑̄͝ĺ̴̤̖̼̲̬̖̹̬̠͌͐̎̍̈̓̅͂̇̚͜͠ͅͅị̸̢͖͓͔̩̺̀̄́̑̑̃̕͜á̶͓̩̪̥̓͆'̴̭͌̂͝ś̷̢̥͙̥̩̺̰̦̓͜͜ ̵̘̂̒̌̅̚Blessing
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    System Guidelines
    Fantasy · lwubb_
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Commented

    Hey now. Lynn is perfect. I think he skimmed over the fact that Lynn may have a robust bust and magnified that she has no fat in places that makes his wood rise.

    "Good morning, Gunther. I dare say I'd be better if that new captain had a smaller attitude and a larger bust. But that'd be asking for too much now, wouldn't it?"
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    A Thread of Broken Fate
    Urban · BrettMichaelOrr
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Posted

    Thank the gods that they graced this website a book as refined as this. So much so that I can't help but do a chef's kiss everytime I read a chapter. All I have are words of praise and compliments for this book.

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    A Thread of Broken Fate
    Urban · BrettMichaelOrr
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Posted

    The opening chapter set the tone for the coming chapters. Also a small hint, a sneak peek to the a major plot point in the story. Really makes you anticipate for more chapters. Cheers to more chapters.

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    Null15454134
    Fantasy · ShadowsOfTheKings
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Posted

    Hey there, it's just me. If you do decide to read this work of mine, then thank you. If you are reading this on a phone then I recommend reading it on Font Size 3! It's actually a necessity or else things would get messy. Thanks again!

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    System Guidelines
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Posted

    A really promising read. I'm a sucker for stories such as this. Everything is done well from the quality of writing, character introductions, and a simple background. The most notable thing about the novel is its action. Right now there's only a few chapters out. So cheers to more chapters.

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    Metallurgy Mage
    Fantasy · BIank_
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Posted

    As of now there's only 2 chapters so there's not much to say. What I can say is that the writing is on point. Descriptive and comes off crisp. Cheers to more chapters.

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    New King Of Eternal Lands
    Fantasy · Kita8944
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Posted

    It has become more than just a webnovel. It is an Epic in every sense of the word. It's clear to see how much work and thought the author has put into this book. I'm all words are said about this from other reviews. The only thing I'll say is that the existence of 'the oracle' and what he did to it shows how impressive the author is at writing a story.

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • lwubb_
    lwubb_1yr
    Posted

    A really enjoyable read. For me at least. If I were to describe the mc in a few words then I'd say "Ayanokouji with a system." which is quite cool. Who doesn't like Ayanoc*ckji?

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    SSS-Rank Villain System: The Hero is Overpowered
    Sci-fi · Haobo_Zhang
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