Such a useless flashback

Bro, if you're going to write a fic, let us know, I definitely liked your ideas.

Cara, é um livro fundamentado na realidade misturado com ficção. Não é só porque tem elementos de ficção que não precise de uma trama crivel, certo?

Zhang Mei would make a good maid/housekeeper for Tian Shen in the bottom verse

This novel really has an interesting and well-done premise from OP mc. Author san really has a good taste in nomenclature, which pleases me a lot. The only point I didn't like very much was the pseudo "break" of the fourth wall related to "authors" and "readers". And at the moment I'm reading (cp 40) the update stability really leaves something to be desired. The author said that he had problems with the Web novel, and that it has already been resolved. So I will trust my 5 stars to you author san. Congratulations and keep up the work well done! And improve the refresh rate! Of course, please lol

I just didn't like the idea of ​​just two families "running" the USA. seriously? this gets so shallow. And politicians certainly don't have direct dialogues like that, it's all between the lines. Improve the political plot. It's not believable.

sentient system sucks

It started well and the premise is interesting. However, there are many holes in the course of the story and inconsistencies in the plot. Honestly, the author doesn't explain many things and writes as if we know. The strength ranking system is horrible, the mc jumps from level 1 to 3 simply because the author didn't do a good job regarding the strength progression of mc opponents, the guy has millions of fucking mutant crystals and he still weaker than enemies? just pathetic. Anyway, the premise has a lot of potential but the execution of the author leaves a lot to be desired.

Positive: - Interesting premise and system Negative: - blind nationalism - Bland characters - Story rushed and poorly grounded in reality One word that describes this novel: disappointment

Even though it's super hard to write a consistent story based on reality and mixing fantasy, the author has done an amazing job so far. The only thing I miss is the mc's interaction with other people, after all he is an important young man, it would be interesting to see people's reactions. Social interactions such as events, lectures and reports would also be interesting. Anyway, congrats on the job ;) I really like this genre of story <3

this is a hidden gem. The author does an amazing job keeping the story engaging. The only point I would like the author to improve is the mc's fights, I would like him to demonstrate his power more. But as it is the beginning of the story (60 caps) I understand the few fights. Please, author, always pay attention to the quality of the chapters :) Congratulations on the work author <3

Crimson Pavilion

I am happy with that! It's not easy to write. I wish you learning and evolution!

It has a lot of potential. But the mc has a very fickle personality, and ends up leaving the story inconsistent. The author presented him as someone cold and indifferent even before God, then he shows anger at situations that he puts himself in. The author makes him an opportunist, which honestly makes no sense, otherwise he would not suppress his power. Anyway, the story has a lot of potential, but it has many inconsistencies in relation to the mc's personality, his power and decisions.