Authorsama in the first arc u called togetic characteristic heavenly grace why is it now serene grace

it is useful . .not useless .our mc Beedrill isn't useless before u face a serious protest from your readers

like seriously this mc isn't that smart they are tens of routine for making money and why would he sell the dragon scale and dragon teeth when he would have a dragon Pokemon

I swr this chapter was so funny . .. I don't know why people don't like this novel . ..is interesting has potential to be top 50 on webnovel just that the grammar mixup spoils it

to yeah I might be or maybe not . .. who knows

I meant casca not cash

what makes me hate the novel is that he reveals his power to the enemy

naming Gwen spider woman is so dry her name is ghost spider for once pls that spider woman is so dry to hear

.. .But seriously your MC's have defect in them first came elementalist with the going home tendency and now horizon with I am perfect and God tendency . .. Hope the would be improvement in his character and behavior because being too perfect or claiming to be God can lead to his downfall . ..but since your the author you wouldn't make it like that . ..just try to change his behavior because even the gods are not prefect and a mere mortal is claiming to be . ..if it was in marvel verse or DC verse he is dead by now

I don't see NTR . .. . all I saw was a careless dragon drifting in space with his mindless love sense and the boring adventure in the same world

The novel is seriously great . .. . law aka horizon is one of the best mc in fanfic now .... but the laughable thing about the novel is that he claims to be a God when his quirk is hand of God ... seriously is laughable .... when I am still reading the novel so I be updating my novel which each 20 chapter's

yeah but author to Me Ryan claims to be the smartest but actually the most foolish if all even though they are his clones I love Kai and dawn battle than Ryan because Ryan acts like a kid in a battle .. .. imagine Ryan was facing a fear god and was shouting it is venom in a cosplay damn his part are sometimes to boring fir out likening

your right but what I hate is the blade scene . .. .. nothing change in the blade scene it ended how it supposed to end . .. why did Kai just help blade when he didn't change the ending seriously I got angry when Ryan is busy stealing gold while blade is fighting for fuck Sake he would have left the novel like that instead of including blade when he did not help blade to keep his lover or stop . . let me rest my case

author your novel is great but the chapter called vigilante is not good. .. your naming sense made it not good . .. .how can u make someone wear batman costume with his accessories and name him vigilante . .. . seriously I don't read the fucking chapter . . try to change his name to something like nightwing or robin

I can't rate this novel higher than this I am currently at chapter 150 and I feel that he is wasting money . .. and seriously what the use of have a stand that changes your appearance when you couldn't even take they mobster jewelries and u just went to buy it and I have a question you said that in the beginning that ancient one was aware when he used the world powers but she don't appear after he use it continuously .. .. ancient one is a being who takes investigation seriously and so I am kinda confuse with the novel Sha

If u love it u can go

harem novels are shits now I am bored of reading them becuz the always have the same formula which one of his wife is pretty and a young master would like to touch her and the MC kills him . .. later the young master uncle comes he be killed by the mc same thing would happen again till the novel is over I am bored of those shit

it isn't flawed tell me whether there are a 1000 no harem novels in webnovel now . .they aren't many now I am bored with harem this and that pls

pls harem Novels are cliche and why must you fellow what others are doing . .harem spoils novel too much that why I detest akikan40 novels

well he meant that the author uses Austin in the novel and people of the pokemon world calls him ash so it kinda confusing . .. but guys I kinda angry with the author Austin / Ash loses in a team battle is against people he can defeat example after the evolution of Weedle . . he was just surprised that it became alpha Beedrill that how yellow won . .. seriously can't he just concentrate on his fight . . and the other was fearows fault . .. who would use a Pokemon that is angry at u to fight men the novel got me angry during this places