wanderstar_fluff
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wanderstar_fluff1mthCommentedsorry to interrupt, but its Tomodachi (friends)
Hello my fellow takodachis! This is not a chapter update, but rather a story update! For old readers, this will be especially important for you!I have ret-conned chapters 05, 06 and 07 after some feedback about how I dealt with Wanda and the MC's backstory portion in chapter 06. And while I will still make this a Wandaship, I feel like I could have done better in setting the foundations for the romance. On the backstory, I fleshed it out further and TRIED my hardest to properly play out my vinland saga moment, though i'm not sure how well it turned out. And so, I have made some changes. For old reader's, I HOPE that the changes made the story better, and for the new readers, thanks for trying out my version of the MTL fanfic! Additionally, after reviewing the chapters, I added and removed a few more dialogues because when I checked the MTL, although they say a few things, these things always get ignored or just one statement commented on by the Chinese authors. I want to fix that. Please help me to point out any important points that I have missed out so that I can ret-con them and administer damage control. At this moment, only Chapters 05, 06 and 07 have been ret-conned. Additionally, I will be changing the name of the MC to "Luke Sullivan" from now on! In the end "Sunny" just felt like a weird name in the MCU. For this, I've already updated all the previous chapters.- wanderstar_fluff4mthCommented[Turn Humanoid]*NEW*
- wanderstar_fluff4mthCommentedCh 26 QNA
- wanderstar_fluff7mthCommentedCh 16 Prelude
- wanderstar_fluff7mthCommentedCh 15 CHAPTER 14 – ASIA MOVES (+18)
- wanderstar_fluff7mthReplied to Blue_Torch
- wanderstar_fluff7mthCommentedCh 57 Chapter 55 - Hashirama!!!!!!!!!
- wanderstar_fluff7mthCommented
it's actually good as I can understand everything that's going on but the part where u teleported jiraya and group to orochimaru needs a little bit of explanation otherwise all good especially if you wrote it in 30 min
(A/N: um… I wrote this in 30 minutes. Is it bad? I'm gonna rewrite if you think it is since it's so fast paced. If you like the pace I might be able to write about 2-3 chapters a day... I think.) - wanderstar_fluff7mthCommented
how did you do this. please tell me?
"G̶̘̅̑̈͒̌͗̉͂̂̏̀̕ȅ̴̟̪̹̪̞͙̦̦͎̖̺̺̗̘̜̈́̈̄̿̎͊͒̀̆͝n̴̬̪͌̓̊̒̄͛͂ė̸̮͍̉͗͗̐͂̆̎̕̕͝r̸͈͉̝̣̥͓̻̳̫̆͊͗̈́̃̔̍͑̆͘̕͜͠ã̶̢̛̱̟͉̪̰͔͙̜̂̂̈̍́̽͐̅t̶̰̯͚̮̦̩̤̣̦̭̒ͅe̷͇͓̬̣͚͔̬͈̟͇̤̊́̾̎͋̈́̐̌ ̵̢̛̛̛̛̜̠͖̲̫̺͎͖̦̝̌͂̐͗̂̄̚̚̚ţ̷̨͉͍̘̬̰̹̖̮̯̜̓͑h̸̢͉̠̺́͒̐e̷̮̯̱̖̤̜̅̈́͆̏̚͝ ̶̧̛̦̞͌͗̾̏̔̽̀͒̎̊̾͝s̸̡̤̭͉̫̪͕̦͙͓͈̯̄̌̈́̈́̈́͝ẙ̸̨̡͚̫͉̥͇̹͔̲̘͙̘̲̣͂͒͌̐͝s̶͚̗̯͑́̊̎̄̃̐͋͋͘̕t̸̨̮̰̻̦̦͔͖̜̜͙͇̝̺͋͂ë̶̞͖͇̰͚̘͕̥̯m̵̻͓̼̹͉̱̣̰̫͎̋̏̂̀̏͗͊̊̐̊̌̀͗͊̚,̵̧͇͚͓͔͓̝͖̄̊̀͛̀̾̈́͛͑̌͛́̉͘ ̶̛͖̠̒̃̅̒͠ä̷̢͈̟͉̝́̈́̒͐͒̈̓̔͐n̷̦̟̘͚͚͚͚͈͒̇͒͂̆͠͝d̴̛̞̬̰̈̍̾͆͊̌̐͐̄̃͒̌̕͜͠ͅ ̸͇́̍̈m̸̨̢̨̲͇͓̰̼̮̭̫̜̭͑͊̃̄̌̂̐̀ė̷̼̤̗̖̜̜̯̭̳̘̂̀̃͑̎͆̾́̌̂͝͝r̴̨̧̡̛͕̬͖̭̺͙͈̱̼͉̞͉͆̈́̑ģ̸̲̱̩̲̗͍͖̱̘̞̗̦̹̎̄̒̒͌̾͌̚ȩ̶̛̙̰͙̯̦̌͐̇̿̈́̽́̍̊͐̽͝ ̸̞͔̜̺͍̯̎t̶̖͕͖̖͕̝̿͑h̷̨̢̹̤̤̣̞͖̒͂͐̈́͐̑ͅe̴̼̗͇͉̗̱̹̫̯̋̈́͑̄̃̽̎͋͜ ̴͖̖̍̊̾͛̈̈́̇͌ş̷͎͈̘̱̗͕̣̻̗̗́͂́̊͊͌͘͝ȯ̵̙̼̦̲̹̟̙̰̣͎̼̩͑̈́̾͊̽̌͂̚̚͠͝ú̴̻̫͍̝̣͔̹̗͐͠l̶̪̫̥̦͍̙̦̗̣̻̙͉̠̿̑̽̓̾̍̎̒͒̍͜ ̵̨̝͍̠̺̱̤͓̟͇̖̎̔̑͋̑̐̈́̈́̀̔͗̅͘͘͜ọ̵̢͛͊̾̀̒̓̉̅̍f̴̙͕͈͇͎̿͆̿̊̃̇̅͝ ̵̨͙̥͈̹̦̟̙̗̺͚͓̓̉̕h̷͓͉̥̯̭̟͚̮̀̆͆͗͑̈͝ȋ̶̛̛͔͈͖̖́̀́̆̽͊̽̈́͊̈͠͝s̵̢͕̫̹͙͉̪͙͉͛͐͋̋͠ ̴̬̯̫̰͈͂͊̌͂̂̒́̄̇̚o̸̯͙͖͍̣͒̊ţ̷̛̋͊͒̃͐̾̇̒̚̚h̵̨̙̯̣̜̭̟̺̙̼̤̏ͅe̵̛͉̼͔̪̺͕̬͈͊͑͊̃͊̌͑̏́͝ř̷̡̢̳̮̤̪̱̗͈͓̠̥̝͚ ̵̱̯̖̦̫̗͍̜͙̩͈̳̀̔̓͒̿̀͐̊̔̕̕͜i̵͕͓̞͒d̷̢̢̨̛̦̩̱̯͓̝͇̞͑̇̍́̚̚͝͝ͅȩ̶̩̗͉̮̩̖̬̳̤̂n̸̹̳̒͌̉͂̍̔̃t̷̜͕͊̏i̵̬̬̪̤͖̝͎͙̮̺̓̀͆͐͒t̸̡̙̎̀̿̏̇͌̂͗̑̂̚ẏ̶̡̨͕̫̻̩̙̮̳̰̜̪̱̌͌͑͠͝ ̵̗͎͍̝̞̥͚̬̣͋̉̅͐͋͒̊̈̕͘͘͜w̴̙̺̲͔̱͍̖͎̞̹̤̠̳̉̂ͅḯ̵̺̩̥͈̣̟̮͙̌͂̈̈͊̉̆͌̿̿̑͘͠ͅͅt̴̪̑̈́̀̍̃̋̄͊̅̍́̍͝ĥ̸̨̢̛͇̺̮̪̙͓̺̻̮̽̄̾́̓͂̈́́̊̎̎͜͝ ̸̨̯͖̀̉͆̋̉̾̆̀̆̏̀̉͐͘̕h̴̢̳̬͍̱̼̟͕̦̟̼͒̓͑í̸̯̰̋̔̎̉͐͐́̚͝m̵͈͙͉͙̫̱͒̔͌͌̌́͑̀͒͑͂͠͠͠.̵̨̨̣̰̻̘͕͖͉̘͈̗̣͉͐" - wanderstar_fluff7mthReplied to wanderstar_fluff
by the way good start[img=recommend]
This book has been deleted. - wanderstar_fluff7mthCommented
ideas - add female interest with may cold personality. And ahve them become thundere or Kuderer personality making the love conquest a little adventure .
This book has been deleted. - wanderstar_fluff7mthCommented
it's actually pretty good just the part where little midoriya and bakugo were celebrating was aa...just leave It's not your fault [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
☆☆☆ CLICK HERE TO PLAY VIDEO[1] ☆☆☆ - wanderstar_fluff7mthReplied to Osypak
well I'd have to take shower again
Waking up I felt refreshed. But when I looked at my alarm clock I started to panic. It's currently at 8 am and the class starts at 8:30 am. Which means I have only 30 minutes left. I quickly went and did my daily routine. Which included brushing my teeth, taking a shower, and taking a shit. - wanderstar_fluff7mthCommented
hehe i got this
After an unknown amount of time, everything remains the same. - wanderstar_fluff7mthReplied to Raul_Sharma
- wanderstar_fluff8mthCommented
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