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PerfectZero
PerfectZeroLv39mthPerfectZero

I'll be honest, the plot is all over the place. Sometimes its he, sometimes it she. What is it? Updates idk. Writing quality is good. World background is ehh cause its marvel. Character design is ehhhhhhhhhh.

Marvel: Become a slime

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wanderstar_fluff
wanderstar_fluffLv3wanderstar_fluff

same but it's too messy it's like a good material but bad product.this could be so good if written correctly

Pandalph
PandalphLv14Pandalph

MC basically become a girl later on… Updates are good but author said they on vacation… hopefully vacation isn’t to long…

Ahmad_Kas
Ahmad_KasLv4Ahmad_Kas

he's originally a man so just make it a he and simple

Pandalph
PandalphLv14Pandalph

Fun fact rimuru novels are almost never written properly!

wanderstar_fluff:same but it's too messy it's like a good material but bad product.this could be so good if written correctly