the author cant write 'action scenes' or in this case the games very well. he just describes what happens in a very boring a slightly detailed way. it would be like reading a game review or something, not a novel. so unless you dont care about that which is the entire point of sport stories than this is a waste of time.

the author is taking this hikigaya in the same way as the original anime, making him a self sacrificing loser for the sake of the greater good.

i cant tell if this is an AI novel or a chinese translation and i dont really care, i just know its pure dogshit. . . . . . .....................................................

.... is this a 2011 wattpad novel or something. wtf did i just read in that synopsis. . . . . . . .............................................................................................

whats the the huge influx of fanfic . net novels. getting harder and harder to see an original now. . . . . . . .................................

crazy how almost every well written naruto fanfic is completely ruined by the dogshit 'romance'. every time you write anything to do with romance it becomes too uncomfortable to keep reading, and at a certain point it was too much to skip through without damaging the story. honestly delete all the romance bits and this novel would be way better. either do a harem smut novel or a normal one, dont try do both, never works.

another decently written story ruined by sexual deviance, harems and paedophilia. nice bro you just put yourself on a list for writing that i bet

it reads exactly like a chinese translation. grammatical errors, weird conversations and AU elements, nothing seem right.....................

discount aizen mc. exploits the branch members and is just incredibly unlikeable. he monologues about his greatness all the time, its actually more cringe the more you read. at one point the mc unironically says the most young master shit you will every read, screaming about how he is going to change the world with his talent "or my name isnt hikari hyuga!" so fucking gay

its a healthy attitude. hope he dosent continue to use the curse seal on branch members tho

its decent. a bit slow, also the author posting 10 different patreon tiers for fanfictions was pretty funny. its written well enough, but again, i cant imagine someone actually paying to read it

im petty when drunk, though i agree with drunk me

people on this website have been brain rotted due to 80% of the novels being stolen chinese reposts or things from wattpad/fanfic/aoe

personally didnt want to read past around 50% of the novel but it was great. written very well, story is nice. i just really dislike the idealism of the MC. never liked shirou as a character, too unrealistic. he might as well be called jesus

holy shit the conversations are so fucking bad. chapter after chapter of back and forth conversations where nothing happens because the mc wont believe a single thing anyone ever says without triple checking. this isnt healthy scepticism, its obsessive paranoia bordering on some schizoid behaviour.

thats gotta be the most convoluted synopsis ive ever read. what should have been a couple words stretched out painfully over a paragraph.....

god this is just sad, this early stage shit AI is infesting everything this year. going to be nothing but recycled ai dogshit for years to come

its written well enough. but the minecraft thing really drags this down for me. for a serious world like game of thrones it just threw me off having Minecraft elements in it

i have two main complaints, the first is the borderline paedophile writing. honestly the fbi should put every author on this website on a list, the amount of pedo stories is crazy. the second was how strong the mc was,, he was 80% as strong as dracule mihawk before he was 10 years old. retarded.

honestly, everything good about this novel, which there are some things, is instantly overshadowed by the blatant pedo undertones and the author described the sexual organs of children. the mc is already starting a harem before he enters puberty and his first two members are a mother a daughter pair. its obvious to anyone reading that this novel will be filled with sexual deviance. romance is fine, even harem can be ignored sometimes, but this author is obviously seriously down bad and needs to be on a list