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So far, enjoyable. The grammar is also pretty well. There are just a few grammar errors. Keep up the good work…………………………………………………………………………………….

So far, the story is good. It has a lot of Potential if you keep develope it like that. The grammar is pretty good, too. There only a few noticable grammar errors. The only thing that could be improved is the character development of the MC. It lacks depth. He has no real goal, for now it is.

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