I like the story so far but I agree that it needs a proper editor. If the one volunteering to check this story’s grammar is willing, I would recommend for the author to let him do so. It is a very interesting plot.
Story is nice and very fast paced. the only problem is the translation. Pls edit and check the sentences properly. Also in the last chapter it says the test showed twin boy and girl but this chapter they dont know the gender so it’s not matching.