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a wonderful story awesome storyline wonderful world building honestly you have just changed my view on webnovel I've never seen a writer dedicated to the basics focusing on not just one person explaining why everything happened you don't just give the main character the leeway to just be doing whatever nonsense like all this cultivation stories and I really appreciate that keep up the good work
I love your story keep up the good work. I just feel you should have added a little bit of a change to your concept of your story like for example the place you talk about the lifespan of your characters with such ability given in the book you're writing it does not make sense for them to still be bound due to lifespan over a course of time and if you make them to be bound over a physical course of time then they should have been a natural law of time which governs them which prevents them from living forever or gaining an unaging body and if you do it as such then all those natural laws and decretum and all those things you are adding do not count. But I feel you should at least even if you did know that one even if I do know that one the concept of the the lifespan and you keep making the lifespan and lifetime they have like maybe 20 billion it's not feasible for something of that ability right and reasoning book is not feasible honestly
Honestly I enjoyed the novel, and I don't agree with the author giving up on it, but it was disappointing especially the last chapter because that was highly unnecessary and I feel there should have been a better end to the story and not the stupid way it ended. I am a big fan of your books and I was beyond disappointed the way u ended Noah's story. You should have considered the thoughts of your readers that followed the story to this point. Anyways I had to let u know because I was very angry about that last chapter. I also agree with the guy above that so many actions were unnecessary. Well I wish you the best in your future books and hope you learn from this. Thanks for all your awesome stories