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  • atome_365
    atome_3651d
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    I thought about your question "where to go once he conquers his universe ?" the best answer I can come with is to follow the example of "harry potter: dimensional wizard" where Savant starts interacting with other universes like 40k, DC or others, maybe a nerf in one way or another would help with interactions between the universes to keep the story from getting out of hands

    Ch 82 Hate
    MARVEL: Scientific Path
    Anime & Comics · PyteWriter
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    atome_36519d
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    while a fight between the two would be interesting I think its much better to leave it as is. the unknowable power of the two speaks more than a written fight

    Ch 112 Behind The Scenes...
    Trials of the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Slayer_King_One
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  • atome_365
    atome_36520d
    Commented

    when leaving with a bang is just not enough anymore and you have to get 3 or 4 supreme beings involved

    Ch 111 Farewell
    Trials of the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Slayer_King_One
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  • atome_365
    atome_3651mth
    Commented

    quick comment but you should make it clear that its in the future as whan I first read I thought the fondation was already implanted in marvel before anything else

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Marvel: The Foundation
    Movies · Darkstar_crow
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  • atome_365
    atome_3651mth
    Replied to Tenebris_Necros

    to be fair in the original the father threatened to bust the door open and let the zombies in if they didnt helphe just ran to their hiding spot bringing death on his heels

    Adjusting the little one in my arms, I turned and looked at the house again. I could feel my blood beginning to boil again; I had to get out of here before I did something I'd regret. Getting the girl to safety was the priority.
    Streamer in the Omniverse
    Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
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  • atome_365
    atome_3651mth
    Posted

    The idea is very good but the grammar is horrible, most sentences are confusing or downright nonsensical, I don't know if its a translation or what but I can't enjoy it at all.

    Traveling through horror cinema, start with Supernatural.
    Movies · MRCAT66
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  • atome_365
    atome_3653mth
    Commented

    I think that was the perfect answer, not letting them step on him yet not a cringy murderhobo that kills at the slightest provocation

    Ch 94 NGJ Chapter 94: A Not So Friendly Spar
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • atome_365
    atome_3653mth
    Replied to Chaosking24

    nah merlin is dezling with tier 14 bs, speed force is nothing

    Ch 562 Soft Than Hard Threat
    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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  • atome_365
    atome_3654mth
    Commented

    Edward being like " ahah you worried me for a sec, now leave daddy alone and come back later"

    Ch 555 Demigod
    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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  • atome_365
    atome_3654mth
    Commented

    anyone knows if someone else translated this novel ?

    Ch 366 Chapter 366 Tatsumi's Wish
    I Don’t Want To Be a Hero
    Anime & Comics · ShLight
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  • atome_365
    atome_3654mth
    Commented

    Oh lord please We need to see the 40k universe !

    The Time Vortex reminded Edward of the Warp from Warhammer 40k. However, unlike the Warp, which is a dimension made of psychic power, the Time Vortex is made of Time Energy.
    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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  • atome_365
    atome_3654mth
    Replied to Bronz_Deck

    oh yeah for sure its really inefficient against characters but they could act as a ram to break battle lines against armieswhat I didnt take into account is that their number of slots used would probably make them not worth it compared to more mages or deathknights

    Ch 82 NGJ Chapter 82: Cloak of the Undead King
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • atome_365
    atome_3654mth
    Commented

    with hundreds of thousands of parts Im wondering why he didnt build giants yet

    Ch 82 NGJ Chapter 82: Cloak of the Undead King
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • atome_365
    atome_3654mth
    Commented

    just firing that worker is mighty generous given the loss of information the empire suffered

    Ch 544 Government Affairs
    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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  • atome_365
    atome_3655mth
    Replied to hachidori717

    dont remember Issei do you ?

    Ch 74 NGJ Chapter 74: Seeing Double
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • atome_365
    atome_3655mth
    Commented

    based Akira

    I could see Ddraig was happy about being able to finally fight. Which is good, happy Ddraig means more affection with Dragon Mommy.
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • atome_365
    atome_3655mth
    Commented

    you good ?

    Ch 366 Chapter 366 Tatsumi's Wish
    I Don’t Want To Be a Hero
    Anime & Comics · ShLight
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  • atome_365
    atome_3655mth
    Commented

    I was quite apprehensive with him gaining so much so quickly but for now its flowing quite well 👍

    Ch 4 A Test
    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • atome_365
    atome_3655mth
    Commented

    thanks a lot for rushing past this dude

    Ch 342 Chapter 342 The Misunderstood Sheila
    I Don’t Want To Be a Hero
    Anime & Comics · ShLight
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  • atome_365
    atome_3656mth
    Commented

    First edict, all edwards are now below me and Im the prime lvl8--->lv11 Done

    Ch 523 The Election (Finale)
    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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