FastSquirrel622
Death is a salvation and life is a gift. If you are given a chance to get any of them don't miss it or you'll regret.but don't ever try to reject one for the other or again you'll regret it.
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FastSquirrel62213dReplied to TaroYo! I think you have some misunderstanding as Hancock isn't the owner of the auction house but Miss Medusa and why does she have Hancock's fruit? well she was the owner of the fruit before Hancock. I think this should clear it up. -------------Squirrel Out
After a next few days Tom's state was less than that of battered sack on the verge of breaking. But after that he was given some food to recover his health as they were nearing the island where the Auction house was situated. And as expected after 10 days of travel they reached the Medusa Auction house on Medusa Island and yes the island and auction houseis named after the owner of the Medusa Auction house, Miss Medusa as she has the power to make everyone who for her stone statue yeah it's Hancock's Love love fruit.- FastSquirrel62227dReplied to Daniel_Nunes_1573Ch 4 System Activation and Message from MORTEM
- FastSquirrel62228dReplied to weeboo30
Thank you my friend for pointing out the mistakes. I have corrected them Thank you and as always advice and suggestions are always welcome
This paragraph has been deleted. - FastSquirrel62229dReplied to Daniel_Nunes_1573Ch 3 notice
- FastSquirrel6221mthReplied to MMEStudioCh 1 The End And The Beginning
- FastSquirrel6221mthCommentedCh 1 The End And The Beginning
- FastSquirrel6221mthCommented
make the staff a secret as it will be odd for him and let the staff have a shapeshift function like changing into a ring or tatoo you can also use tatoo for hiding the wings if you like or if it's helpful please respond to my both comments and update faster. ---squirrel out
And one more question is related to the staff! The staff should be made as a secret weapon and not used too often. And take Ollivander's wand in his place. Or will МС use a staff? - FastSquirrel6221mthCommented
you should insert an evolution element for example first a normal angel with basic powers then leader angel then angel commander then arch angel etc give him more powers with every evolution and his wings number and size should increase with each evolution and you should also consider his body size when increasing wings length because it doesn't make sense his wings are the same size from start till end even if he is a normal angel you should give a range (min size - Max size) for every evolution. ---squirrel out
Do you think it's worth awakening his race completely and immediately? Or gradually? - FastSquirrel6229mthCommentedCh 124 123. Stupid Fox
- FastSquirrel6229mthCommentedCh 124 123. Stupid Fox
- FastSquirrel6229mthCommentedCh 115 114. Everyone Is Villain
- FastSquirrel6229mthCommentedCh 113 112. Terrified Kaliya
- FastSquirrel6229mthCommentedCh 112 111. Super Affinity
- FastSquirrel6229mthCommentedCh 112 111. Super Affinity
- FastSquirrel6229mthReplied to Bogdan7
You should know that it is not talking about square metres it's talking about cubic metres
This book has been deleted. - FastSquirrel6229mthCommentedCh 111 110. 100 Headed-Serpent
- FastSquirrel6229mthCommentedCh 111 110. 100 Headed-Serpent