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Nana_Nana_9209

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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_92091mth
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    Tidak bisakah kau memberi tambahan memanipulasi elemen pada MC, dia bahkan tidak bisa dibandingkan dengan Art. Memberikan cheat setengah-setengah seperti itu hanya membuang potensi pengembangan cerita mempersempit perluasan karakter dan pada akhirnya membuat mc hanya sebagai tokoh npc kuat yang unggul dalam beberapa aspek tanpa keistimewaan yang dapat dilihat tanpa latihan. Maksudku bahkan memberikan manipulasi elemen magma sebagai bagian dari manipulasi yang lebih rumit tidak akan memberikan kompensasi apapun dan kau hanya memberinya 2 manipulasi elemen dasar? Apa yang salah denganmu?

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
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    Gamer in TBATE
    Anime & Comics · Felegranco
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_92091mth
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    Hanya dua elemen, kenapa tidak kau maksimalkan kemampuan mcnya

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    Gamer in TBATE
    Anime & Comics · Felegranco
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_92094mth
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    if there were other reincarnators in the story, the MC's knowledge of the world would be almost automatically useless

    Ch 2 Let's talk Business
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    Madara in the Avatar World
    Anime & Comics · KojiSan
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_92098mth
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    even with having so much power, he didn't think to have at least the skill and experience of using it. the stupid type of protagonist makes the story plot feel too forced.

    Ch 1 Died & Reincarnated
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    I am Gojo Satoru in DxD
    Anime & Comics · Dao_leader
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_92098mth
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    Nerf version of Kotodama Magic (Black Clover). Interesting concept, but I don't see how he can compete with a walking bomb, a guy who could theoretically make an iceberg, or a green broccoli guy who could destroy a mountain. Unless there is awakening, I don't see how the MC can play a big role in the story without plot armor, which would clearly make the story feel forced.

    Ch 5 5: Top Scorer
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    MHA: Reboot
    Anime & Comics · FleemusDesirus
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_92098mth
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    Nerf version of Kotodama Magic (Black Clover), Interesting concept.

    Ch 1 1: Reborn
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    MHA: Reboot
    Anime & Comics · FleemusDesirus
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_920911mth
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    Reed Richard is that you? 😮

    Ch -2 Wishes
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    Gravity Falls: A Summer Full Of Mysteries... FINALLY!!!
    Anime & Comics · Arthur_Gameplay
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_920911mth
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    I don't know why, but the unrealistic achievements make the story feel cheap

    Ch 16 Chapter 16
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    Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
    Book&Literature · Se7en
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_92091yr
    Commented

    let's imagine he is 10cm taller

    Ch 1 Bio
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    Plunderer x BNHA (OP Male Reader)
    Action · Da_cAt_is_HiGh
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  • Nana_Nana_9209
    Nana_Nana_92091yr
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    granting a wish to regenerate when he could possess the reverse curse technique?

    Ch 1 Rengoku?! (Edited)
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    Breathe I: Jujutsu Kaisen (Hiatus)
    Anime & Comics · Phantom_Zero_v2
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