Any spoilers about later story developments?

Sorry you don't like it

Shameless Author Review This is a re-written story, intended to be a self insert fanfiction that incorporates elements across all Dragon Ball media in one big super story. I would like the comment sections for this fanfiction to be a platform for discussion so I encourage any ideas, feelings or sentiments to be voiced. Thank you for reading

No, I went on holiday for a bit Not dropped

Yeah This is 100% Merus no Angel powers Although MC could probably catch up, Merus isn't allowed to use his full power

I wanted to re-write the story because the one I had written before was effectively a max power any percent speedrun This time, I'm want to try and write a decent story

I'll send it to you on Patreon

At a time I was yes, but to be honest, my personal life took a lot of my attention for a while and so I didn't have a lot of time to write chapters. I still left my Patreon up as a sort of interest measurement but as embarrassing as it is to immediate, although most of the future is planned, I haven't written as far forward as I would have liked.

Really? I wanted to impose some limits since I thought the MC was too crazy but if this is the case I’ll have to change it

I can just tell you Frieza trains regularly in the universe

Of course not

I’m not sure how recently you read this but I was actually in agreement with you I just retconned a ton of stuff to make the story more streamlined

Sorry boss I'm retconning some stuff, gimme a bit

I agree I’m going to retcon a few things within the story soon, that should be among them

I added a prologue Hopefully things should be more clear nowe

The low effort response is for me to tell you to read the next chapter The beginning of which actually explains everything that has been going on up until that point The high effort response is for me to actually fix the problem with my story Thank you for reading

True Wasn’t as wise in retrospect, I might adapt that

I’ll work on it

It's actually really good

You're right, I'm going to retcon this