Review Detail of Kiiiddd in I Saved the World of Dragon Ball

Item: I Saved the World of Dragon Ball
Rating: 1.8

Review detail

KiiidddLv141yrKiiiddd

Made it to the end of the 2nd chapter and still had almost no idea what was going on. It is probably explained later but lost interest before I got to "later". Has the feeling like lots of detail will get left out to try and keep you reading. Using that technique can be ok but right at the beginning of a book is just a bad idea

I Saved the World of Dragon Ball

OneShotMonk

Liked it!

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OneShotMonkAuthorOneShotMonk

I added a prologue Hopefully things should be more clear nowe

1yr

OneShotMonkAuthorOneShotMonk

The low effort response is for me to tell you to read the next chapter The beginning of which actually explains everything that has been going on up until that point The high effort response is for me to actually fix the problem with my story Thank you for reading

1yr

KiiidddLv14Kiiiddd

FYI the prologue isn't a numbered chapter so webnovel will still start on the Brolly chapter. So maybe add at the top of your novel description to read the prologue first.

OneShotMonk:I added a prologue Hopefully things should be more clear nowe

1yr