I find the story interesting for now. Have a read at it and decide whether or not it is worth following. No harsh opinions here.

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good build up.

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That is a nice one

IT is a good introduction, although i did get a little bit of familiar vibes.

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As i have progressed in the story i find that the character development and details of each scene is described in a detailed manner that is up to my satisfaction.

The story has two main characters which is a bit awkward to read and understand. But once gain the hang of the story development and plotline, you feel that the author is trying to develop a stage for the two characters to have a meet which might or might not be ill farted and complicated. That very thought gives me chills and I would love to read it.

The character might get to fight multiple enemies in levels unimaginable before. The character is developing in an uniform manner and i find it acceptable. The number of which has been proposed until now, especially the old man and the military.