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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone2mth
    Replied to daniel_no

    Dude is the only thing you know how to write making an Mc suffer? Time and time again you keep writing him into shitty situations making him suffer from chapter 1 and now I am in the 200s nothing at all has changed he is not op or none of that you keep keeping in extremely low cultivation levels barely making progress you keep giving new abilities and cultivation types one after the other and making his progress ass worst of all is how you see the need to keep repeating the same thing and same lines OVER AND OVER AGAIN like fam respectfully I won’t say I hate your book after all I am still reading it right now and would read to the end but something that bugs me is why do y’all authors at times thing the only way to develop an mc’s character is suffering like mate if he suffers some times or some arcs that’s calm but since you started this book nothing good at all for the mc only suffering one after the other I don’t wanna question if you are sadist or something I just can’t help it this time so I have to

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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Martial Arts · Awespec
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone2mth
    Replied to Ak02

    What of the update on grammar and spelling errors?

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    Fire Mage
    Fantasy · Ak02
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone2mth
    Posted

    Novel’s a banger and would absolute recommend. A lot of people these days are sheep who feel once an Mc is overpowered or grows fast or has cheats the story sucks well I’m someone who frankly likes seeing overpowered mcs scaling through several levels and honestly this story has that at its finest and is very good to read only thing I would like is a few tiny bits of side character chapters every now and then but the hype of every new chapter and journey and the massive world this story is based in just makes it too good. And the power tiers are also great it has literally everything from hunters to cultivation to magic to well basically a fusion of everything to power system I personally have never seen kudos

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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Video Games · Adui
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone2mth
    Replied to Garrett_Marshall_6253

    This guy actually said strongest in the world? Strongest who? What? Where? When? Even right now in the story compared to a lot of people as op as the mc is some people can sneeze and accidentally annihilate him from existence lmfao dude said strongest you have no idea how vast this verse is or how strong one of the strongest verses ever

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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Video Games · Adui
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone3mth
    Posted

    Why did you have to change the simulator mahn why make it random smh the simulator’s functions were perfect before why make it worse.......................,.,,,,........................... .

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    Fantasy Simulator
    Eastern Fantasy · Salted Fish Jienan
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone3mth
    Replied to Casual_0033

    Won’t Ben bland at all cause he could have a timeskip next chapter also when mc looses consciousness it’s as if he wakes up in a sec so it won’t have changed nothing

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    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone3mth
    Posted

    This novel is very daft for several reasons lol it’s almost like the Mc is some form of idiotic masochist and I don’t know the whole point of writing the mc to be like a fool to nerf him or introduce face slapping but it’s quite silly giving someone cheats and not letting them even use anything close to its potential if you couldn’t bear to write an Mc like that then don’t give him the necessary cheats just makes him stupid. For example 1. When the Mc is in an inanimate object he can simply tell the system to turn off and awaken his consciousness after a certain period and it’s literally like he just opened and closed his eyes. So why couldn’t he simply stay in one place turn of his consciousness for like 100,000 years and he’ll have more than enough energy to buy everything required to thrive and it’s not like he would be awake or even asleep that long it’ll pass in a literal blink of an eye for him don’t know what he is rushing for but it’s stupid to me a simple cheat he could use to get actually strong but he rather does something silly. 2. Worst of all is why did he start cultivating with the absolute worst potential of body there is? It’s sad mad first you abandon the whole energy concept and go the cultivation route then you make the Mc a retard

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    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone3mth
    Posted

    Started this and was really enjoying it until idek what got into the author. He starts giving a lot of backstory and history and then instead of moving the story one 350 chapters in its barely gone anywhere still in the same “mundane” world hasn’t even reached nascent soul. Then we have the part when romance got introduced every 5-10 chaps it’s always some form sex or the other every little thing it’s sex dude just got told that they are only living in 5% of his entire plane and are simply lambs waiting to be slaughtered the response after that seems to be more women to the harem. Author said he’ll start moving the story forward with more action but still every 5 chaps or a bit more it’s more sex scenes with qing or some other love interest coming again like mahn can’t the serious stuff be there before all this stuff not to mention this guy is about 14... for lord’s sake. You literally have 7 planes 8 desloces 9 hells 10 heavens the chais the void and freaking oblivion to explore and all I keep reading is sex in fact the sex is so insane even the bloodlines themselves want to have a go what crap is going on can’t be story be even 10% more serious? This gives me the vibes of stories where so much potential and world background won’t even be explored and would just end with it being rushed to some nasty conclusion cause all these extra chapters wasting on lord knows what could been used to progress this story and build up this world more

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    The Legend of Min Hong
    Eastern Fantasy · ORIGIN_ESSENCE
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone3mth
    Replied to Dune_Lone

    Update.......read till the hundreds and dropped his level ups getting too slow for me after seeing some spoilers not downgrading or discouraging but this is not for me

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    New Age Of Summoners
    Fantasy · vinayraj
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone3mth
    Posted

    Do the grammatical errors ever stop? Seriously not trying to be rude here but why would you put up chapters with so much errors that makes one feel like he or she is reading machine translations? Like even a simple grammarly could do the job I wonder when the errors would end I checked the authors review before reading and he says that there are errors in the beginning however I am already 200 plus chapters in and the errors are still there even a bit worse

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    New Age Of Summoners
    Fantasy · vinayraj
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone3mth
    Posted

    Sorry I have no issues with this it’s quite good but the grammar is quite nasty at times especially with stuff that are singular and plural. I hope an editor can help out with this it’s makes me think I’m reading a hybrid of proper translation and mtl

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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • Dune_Lone
    Dune_Lone3mth
    Posted

    Honestly I don’t have much issues with rn as I am in the 180s I like the novel and would finish cause I like stuff like this and hope it gets better. However there are two things annoying me rn 1. Why does he seem to share his power with every single damn person and tell so many people his secrets I know he keeps talking about not wanting to be like light novel protagonists however to me that’s extremely naive and too irrational. if he shared it with some or at least kept a few things to himself it’s understandable however he says too much in my opinion and he maybe to just me he always feels vulnerable. 2. I’m on like 180 and this guy is frankly damn weak to be very honest here. How can someone with so many skills and basically dual cultivation since he both levels up and cultivates a mana core with a broken attribute be struggling so much just to cross ranks and beat a rank 3 goblin? If you don’t wanna make the Mc too op that’s cool but you can give him mind blowing cheats and plot armour then make him struggle to just cross a little rank I don’t like that I feel it may get better latter on but it’s just isane. He at like spiritual soul in soul cultivation which is smth I doubt even a rank 4 can even have not to mention being like level 27 along with his rank 2 void core its absolute bonkers to me that he simply can’t cross one rank to beat a single newly ascended goblin since the start till now the Mc feels way too weak. Other than those two great novel I’m still reading and would go on just hope this guy gets stronger

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    My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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