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  • Kai_Zai
    Kai_Zai2yr
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    I've read 110 chap and i must said after the supreme megus this is the best anti hero novel I've read on WN and this deserves higher ranking then some of the cringy novels in top50. Keep up the good work and i hope u wont drop this novel and finish it.

    Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
    Fantasy · Grayback
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  • Kai_Zai
    Kai_Zai2yr
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    How can u guys give this story a 5* review, when the writing quility is so bad, the miss use of past tense and miss use of grammar makes it so hard to read this, while reading this i was just shaking my head. It just took me out of the story as soon as i see looks instead of looked and such mistecks, I couldn't get past 5 chaps with all this mistakes, i found out that this story had editor if so what is he doing. I see no improvement in grammar at all SMH . As for the story it self i didn't go far to give my proper opinion but from what i saw, author has cookie cutter chars from anime here aka yandere n stuff which im not a fan of, as for mc he just did 180 turn in his behavior out of no where and excepted that the girl turned him into a vampire n she is his wife without getting angry or anything. I would have given this story a try but meh the miss use of the grammar is huge turn off and i dont see why ppl keep giving it 5* review while better stories getting burried under all this generic anime fan fics sigh

    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • Kai_Zai
    Kai_Zai2yr
    Replied to IsUnavailable

    Ur a editor? Look at all the mistecks made in first few chaps, all the miss use of tense is so off putting, i could get past 5 chaps coz its hard for me to read, its just off putting and since i do PRs myself ots even worse. You guys should be starting with beginning chaps not late chaps, sigh As for chars u said they unique, hell no they sound like just cookie cutter anime chars and mc doing 180 chard turn in few chaps

    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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