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How can u guys give this story a 5* review, when the writing quility is so bad, the miss use of past tense and miss use of grammar makes it so hard to read this, while reading this i was just shaking my head. It just took me out of the story as soon as i see looks instead of looked and such mistecks, I couldn't get past 5 chaps with all this mistakes, i found out that this story had editor if so what is he doing. I see no improvement in grammar at all SMH . As for the story it self i didn't go far to give my proper opinion but from what i saw, author has cookie cutter chars from anime here aka yandere n stuff which im not a fan of, as for mc he just did 180 turn in his behavior out of no where and excepted that the girl turned him into a vampire n she is his wife without getting angry or anything. I would have given this story a try but meh the miss use of the grammar is huge turn off and i dont see why ppl keep giving it 5* review while better stories getting burried under all this generic anime fan fics sigh
Ur a editor? Look at all the mistecks made in first few chaps, all the miss use of tense is so off putting, i could get past 5 chaps coz its hard for me to read, its just off putting and since i do PRs myself ots even worse. You guys should be starting with beginning chaps not late chaps, sigh As for chars u said they unique, hell no they sound like just cookie cutter anime chars and mc doing 180 chard turn in few chaps