Immortal_Locus
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I am an author who dabbles in a lot of different genres in my free time, mainly eastern and western fantasy. My favorite currently active book is Reincarnated as an Energy with a System.
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Immortal_Locus10mthPostedI don't really have an opinion on the book, but I'm going to say this, the fact that people are reviewing this book as good even though they can't fluently speak or write English goes a long way to show that this book isn't as good as their making it out to be. Just a fair warning to others. I'm still gonna give this 5 stars in hopes the author will recognize this and delete the worthless reviews and raise his own standards.
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was half expecting someone to be stupid and ask 'Why would adventurers give monsters weapons?', glad no one was stupid enough for that. (for those that come across this and wonder what the answer to the above question is, the goblins killed those poor adventurers and took the weapons.)
Following the sound of the Goblins, Haruhime peeked around a corner before sighing silently to herself because there were eleven goblins instead of her presumed seven. She suspected there could be more present, but she was still somewhat disappointed and knew there was a lot of work she had to do before reaching the proficiency of someone like Aki. Haruhime noticed two of the goblins had battered weapons, likely obtained from other Adventurers, while the rest had makeshift clubs using small stalagmites found around the Dungeon. She spent a few seconds determining the best method to defeat them before taking a deep breath and stepping out from the shadows and drawing her katana. Though she could eliminate them from afar with her magic, each cast cost between 30-50 mana and she would deplete most of her personal reserves before the fight came to an end. It was more dangerous to fight up close, but it allowed her to develop her physical parameters and was far more efficient than using a single target magic. - Immortal_Locus10mthCommented
Part of me questions the reality of this and if this... has ever been done outside of fantasy. Another finds it... stimulating.
Chloe burst out laughing the moment Ryuu started to blush and hesitate before she chimed out in an amused tone, "If you're willing, Vahn, every girl here wants to celebrate and have sex with you~nya! It's to show our unity, our sisterhood, and the emotions we all share together, not just with ourselves, but with you as well. How we go about it is entirely up to you though~nyahaha." With Chloe's little outburst, the atmosphere in the room became somewhat awkward and tense. Vahn could see the somewhat pink auras of everyone turn a richer shade with a small tinge of red. - Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to NocturneofAstoraCh 331 Nirvana
- Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to Merret
indeed.
Syr: Busy: Good luck in the dungeon Vahn... - Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to Yuna_sama
she knows him too well lol
Syr: Busy: Good luck in the dungeon Vahn... - Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to KiipsCh 318 First World Problems
- Immortal_Locus11mthCommentedCh 2335 The Concepts You Abandoned! II
- Immortal_Locus11mthCommented
Genghis Khan jr right here. (without all the bad qualities of his father, just all the women.)
Vahn returned her smile with one of his own and said, "Welcome to the Familia, Aki." Even though Vahn knew she had been sent by Loki, he understood it was probably for the best since he desperately needed stronger members to help look after the weaker girls. He didn't know her capabilities yet, but Aki was a Level 4 and looked to be near twenty years old. Vahn assumed she had a wealth of experience and would be a good influence on the other girls in the future. His only concern, since she had been sent by Loki, was that she was also going to be entering his 'circle' within the future. Not just because of Hestia's influence, but Vahn felt like there were simply too many women around him and the number seemed to constantly be increasing. - Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to Whimsikun
Lube wont help if its literally like a vice
After dinner, Hestia once again took a bath with Vahn and they affectionately talked about various matters before making their way back to the bedroom. Since Fenrir still stayed with Preasia, Hestia had Vahn all to herself and was intending to take proper advantage of this fact after realized that Loki had left the talismans in the room. Unfortunately, though she seemed willing, Vahn prevented Hestia from pushing herself and said she needed to take better care of her body for the time being. Since she refused to let him heal her, there were various dangers to indulging in intercourse so soon after losing her virginity. And, though he didn't mention it, Vahn was actually a bit intimidated by Hestia's vagina after the experience of the previous night. He was hoping that, after her body healed and became more accustomed to the act, it wouldn't be nearly as 'painful' when Hestia inevitably orgasmed and clamped down on him. - Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to Blaze101Ch 270 Relax...
- Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to Michemancer_Obi
exactly
When everyone had left, Hestia asked Vahn, "So, you have relaxation time until lunch. Did you have anything planned?" Ever since their interaction this morning, Vahn noticed Hestia had been acting rather reserved compared to her former self. She had a gentle smile and a steady aura and Vahn could see a perpetual sparkle in her deep blue eyes. After thinking about her question for a bit, Vahn said, "I think I'll just lounge about in the library in the western wing. I want to enjoy a bit of peace and quiet and simply read books for a bit." Vahn had the ability to purchase thousands of books relatively cheaply through the system, so he had devoted an entire section of the western wing into a library in the past. - Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to Demelios
that aint gonna help him relax lol
As if reminded by her words, Vahn returned to his normal appearance as he watched Milan's back exit through the door. After a few seconds of silence passed through the room, Vahn laid back on the couch and released a somewhat exasperated sounding sigh. He couldn't help but feel that, even though he was supposed to be relaxing, his body was in even higher tensions after everything that had happened. He actually didn't mind physical exhaustion much, it was the mental strain of dealing with emotional situations that weighed heavily on his heart and mind. Vahn began to wonder if he needed to be more decisive at times and pay more attention to the mental states of others before he took action. Even though it was rarely his intention, Vahn's actions seemed to always trigger some event that caused emotional development in himself or others...he began to, for the first time, feel like he needed to be less invested in the lives of others if he wanted to actually relax. - Immortal_Locus11mthCommented
no one commented here? Wow... I'm disappointed.
Because her skirt was short, Vahn got a little distracted since Haruhime wasn't wearing any leggings. She had long, almost pale, white legs and Vahn noticed that, while her moves were inexperienced, there was a dance-like quality to Haruhime's steps. Since her tail swayed around behind her, Vahn kept giving it glances until he noticed something that made his brows rise slightly. His desire to purchase clothes for Haruhime increased several folds since he realized, for whatever reason she might have come up with, Haruhime wasn't wearing panties. - Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to Extheme
yes, again.
(A/N: NSFW btw...) - Immortal_Locus11mthCommented
high tension state gets me off guard every time, i keep thinking enemies are approaching.
By the time the afternoon rolled around, Preasia finally woke up and Fenrir immediately entered a high-tension state that drew Vahn's notice. He realized that she seemed receptive to the fact he could sense her aura and now used it to communicate with him if he was far away. After a short while, Vahn gathered everyone into the dining room while the twins helped Preasia out of their room. Though she looked very tired, Vahn saw that the light had returned to her light-grey eyes and felt more than a little relieved to see her on the road to recovery. - Immortal_Locus11mthReplied to Alemax08
no, Ein said she didnt even manage to get out of bed before he returned. It's still 1400x
The rest of the evening was relatively uneventful as Vahn, Hestia, and Fenrir enjoyed a larger dinner before Vahn spent a little time pampering the two spoiled girls before bed. Hestia seemed completely comfortable with the massage at this point and Fenrir refused to be left out so Vahn tied up her paws before putting them both to sleep. Afterward, Vahn went to sleep before waking up and spending a bit of time researching with Eva who had been making her own improvement in forging with Vahn's permission to use his forge. Since she could change her clothing with magic, Eva had adopted the look of wearing nothing but a pair of overalls and gloves as she worked away on pieces of metal. Because she was very petite, Vahn almost wanted to remark that she looked like a child 'playing' blacksmith, but he knew her well enough to keep those words to himself. - Immortal_Locus11mthCommented
redundancy XD
Before he left, Vahn left a note on the table, door, wall, and the edge of the bed, just in case Hestia panicked when she woke up. Since he was worried she would overreact if she couldn't find him, Vahn left a proper explanation since he didn't want her to cause a scene and involve everyone else in the matter. On the table next to the bed, he even left a fresh breakfast for her and covered it with a silver top to preserve the heat.