Why are you giving astalfo a they/them pronouns? That’ s stupid, it’s clearly shown as She/her. I can accept changing genders and whatever but this just ruined his character for me. It’s bad enough bro identifies himself as a women when he as a dick but seriously.

Fuck you, wasting my time and only promoting this shit to your patreon.

DIssapointing Ngl gang

Yeah I thought the same thing

Harem= trash

Thanks fam, bigger reason not to read it for ms

Well this is shit, reading the reviews and replies of other people makes me wanna kill my self. We got fucktards on the right justifying that everyone in the ninja world is a grapest, then we got the sh*t Bags on the left riding the authors big black third leg. It only proves two points, this story is extremely shit and only desperate losers who have no life, or has zero interaction with a normal human being like it, and that apparently every ninja, bandit, thief, and whatnot are less then human and have grape built in their biology. Wish I could put zero stars so people avoid this garbage but sadly I cannot

Bro stfu, now your sounding like your justifying r*pe. The fact that it’s overused makes the story boring to read, stop riding the authors horse fam

Why it gotta be harem man, that’s just gross.

I changed my mind, this is possibly one of the best fics out there rn in terms of continuation. Like holy shit I’ve read 20 chapters all in one go and can’t wait for the rest. Although I hoped there would be more itachi and robin, this is still very good.

Author chose the worst possible devil fruit.

Possibly one of the most cringe fanfic I’ve ever read holy shit. It’s so bad tf is going on man………………………..

I was hyped at first, but then it always goes down a shithole once hatred goes to the 4th. Absolutely unnecessary and completely stupid, to the point that I didn’t even want to continue reading it. Way to go being a Generic author.

Annoyed you hate ussop cause he’s one of my fav characters so I’m giving you a low rate.

Not even that, grammer is terrible.

This is shit, not because of the story line, but the grammer. Please fix this, it’ s hard, if not impossible to read. What an absolute shit show. Highly dissatisfied

Takes you 40 chapters to start? Almost made me drop fr don’t do that fam. Other then that not bad, 8/10 .…………………………………….

I’ll be honest, this got boring very quickly, slice of life within shounen anime does not go well. I could not keep reading without falling asleep, make it more enjoyable or something.

Alright story telling and good backgroun, it’ just I dont like the mc, to simpy. And also it’ just a recap of the og so it got boring very quickly. Other then that good story

The R@pe scenes kinda ruined it for me tbh, like I get it, Comedy and all but still. And just because your maidenless does not mean the mc should be too. Idk man I feel annoyed with this story. Other then that it was alright ig