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the_properknighT

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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Replied to thefirespeaks

    there's nothing relevant that I see there

    Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
    Fantasy · thefirespeaks
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Replied to thefirespeaks

    well MC is like a coward in the later chapters, that's not being cautious anymore and there is nothing relevant about the kther scene, imma remove this on my reading list, it's the worst I have ever read, I'm sorry I can see you tried something different but you tried hard and it's worse than the worst

    Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
    Fantasy · thefirespeaks
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Posted

    doesn't make sense, I read until chapter 150 and wow I gotta say, I don't get it. How is any of the cruel things like r*pe and the like relevant to the story line and the development of the MC if he is just gonna stay silent and the more he goes to the upper real, the more his power is restricted. I mean it's like, MC was Op but now he is being a waste. I'm sorry but I have to rate this one, I have never read something that made me rate it and never cared. I feel like the author is making this as he writes along the way. I don't I mean there are a lot or irrelevant scenes here that does not even help in character development of the author. and the things that happen here like the MC is just some kind of supporting character. I mean what the heck is going in here. what happened until he went to the second upper realm. there are relationships happening around the MC but even though the MC is like relationships this and that but not even one girl has got feelings for the MC. I mean wow this just don't sit well, I mean yeah it's a cool system but what I keep thinking is that there are a lot of irrelevant scenes the author included, and irrelevant characters, isn't the story supposed to show how the MC grows and changes from being cruel amd villainous and growing to defeat whoever is like watching, I mean it's like everybody knows everything and the mc is clueless about everything, what the H is going on. I have never seen something like this, I liked this 11 outta 10 but it's just dropped to -11 outta ♾ .

    Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
    Fantasy · thefirespeaks
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    even if you explain the failures it's still a seventh grade when it was multiplied by 10,000 wow so what about 2 them or 2k 1st grade pill multiplied by 2 is still peak high 1st grade pill

    [Seventh-grade Nirvana Pill: A top-tier seventh-grade pill. This pill can only be refined by a top-tier pill master, and even then there is a high failure rate.]
    Disciple Cashback System: I Got Exposed By My Disciple
    Eastern · Three Golden Crow
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    the mc already has been inthis world for few years to have an impression of the girl already... I thought he just got in that world

    Moreover, Ye Xuan occasionally noticed that Lu Yanran was very diligent with her work.
    Disciple Cashback System: I Got Exposed By My Disciple
    Eastern · Three Golden Crow
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    should it not be immortal cycles

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    chrysanthemums

    ''Ah~'' Perry bent her lower back and lifted her buttocks more as Jake played with her little flower.
    Sin System: Demonic Harem After Reincarnation
    Fantasy · FireEngine
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    no such thing, that's a Sin opposite to virtue

    Perry didn't have smutty desires in her mind. She would never-
    Sin System: Demonic Harem After Reincarnation
    Fantasy · FireEngine
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    psycho

    5) Tier 5 yandere: They are very dangerous and have fallen so deep that they will even kill their own lover if he does not agree with or cheats on them. After that, they will kill themselves in the hope to reunite together with their lover in the next life to start all over again.
    Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
    Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    I thought after this tge author would say just kidding she said that

    aahhh Elandor, oooooh... Holy shit thizzzz... this is just too much for my first time...just put the dammm thing insideeeee pleased...I beg you...pleaszzzzz!"
    Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
    Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    pur pur pur purple pur pur purple

    White, green, blue, red, purple, purple, purple, purple, and seven colors increased one after another.
    New Father: Empress Appearing On My Doorstep With Our Daughters
    Eastern · Cloud Fire Pheonix
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Posted

    well this is something else. the author contradicts what they wrote. I feel like the author changed during the 100th chapter. it was good at first and enjoyable even though there were a lot of face slapping I liked it but, I feel like the strength of the main character is not being expressed at the 100th chapter like how the author said at the beginning. it's a great story but the mc is weak through and through. I feel like him defeating a primal real at dao should have been edited out.

    10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start
    Eastern · Li Baijin
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    salesman

    The shopkeeper put on an act and bargained with him for a while. He gave the impression that he was on the losing end and eventually agreed to accept six thousand taels of silver.
    I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess
    Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Replied to Seraphim28

    I think he took a single step and doubled the speed

    A thirty-mile journey only took a few minutes.
    I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess
    Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    why say that

    "It doesn't matter if there's money or not. As long as our friendship is strong enough," Xiao Ran said.
    I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess
    Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    bruh It's still in the early chapters why you gotta introduce the tragic of the first character at the dude shop

    She stayed there naked for a week, thinking about dying every second, but her father's teachings always stopped her from attempting suicide. When she finally stood up, she decided to live for only revenge. But it seems her bad luck still hasn't left her away; she injured her dantian while attempting to reach Nascent Soul.
    The First Store System
    Fantasy · pinaka_
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    maybe he is the spark creator or the residual energy that created the devas or a first creation of the spark

    Race: [*******],
    The First Store System
    Fantasy · pinaka_
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    well I gon' convince myself he is not blue

    "Perfect looks," He suddenly had this thought in his heart when he looked at the stranger.
    The First Store System
    Fantasy · pinaka_
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    I thought he already has information 🤔 😕 😐

    "Speaking of which, I wonder what kind of battle units other people have. Is there more information about this world…?"
    Everyone Has a Castle: I Choose Elves to be in My Army
    Eastern · Furious Widow
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  • the_properknighT
    the_properknighT1yr
    Commented

    this mc is ....

    After all, he was the only one who could recruit a battle unit like the Elven Empress that was not only already God Tier as an Adult, but was also a unique battle unit.
    Everyone Has a Castle: I Choose Elves to be in My Army
    Eastern · Furious Widow
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