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RJTWRITER

RJTWRITER

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A first time writer who wishes to practice writing and tell good interesting stories.

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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER30d
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    One of the points raised by Lily and being stuck was that she was not able to be with her son. But we also know she was not super fond of James and perhaps was using him just for the bloodline. It is difficult to tell what kind of relation the two could have. I could see Lily wanting to use Harry for her own ends. But perhaps there is still a little maternity instinct there? It is hard to tell, the author has done a good job at making Lily and unknown. Random side thought, if Grindelwald dies. Will the dark choose a new champion in Voldemort or Neville? If Dumbledore dies, will the Light choose Neville or Lily? I worry that one way or another, the choosing of champions will doom Harry. And like with Morgana and Merlin, he will have to act like Mordred and put both down.

    Ch 232 Chapter 232: The Stony Path
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    RJTWRITER1mth
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    I think the author has given us a hint of what Harry could be in the story. The story of Merlin and Morgana ended with both their deaths but now we learned Mordred lived. Perhaps history is repeating itself with Harry being an essential peace of ending this war between light and dark. Something to keep in mind is that both Grindelwald and Dumbledore are bad mouthing Voldemort but I think the old boy might have a few tricks.

    Ch 227 Chapter 227: Black and White
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER1mth
    Replied to Firefly4545
    And right now, that resource looked like half of it had collapsed and all of it was on fire...
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER2mth
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    Is this Grindelwald in disguise? Is this how he was able to escape and show up behind dumbledore? We know Sirius and him are working together. So why oh why are they going through this charade with Neville?

    Ch 212 Chapter 212: A War of Words
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER2mth
    Replied to Firefly4545

    Lol, I am looking forward to it

    They both found each other squeezing the other's hand. James was still looking at her smiling, Barbara returned it, and they both lulled into a comfortable silence staring at each other.
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER3mth
    Commented

    Intriguing, a machine wanting purpose is a story we have all heard. Having it forcefully create its purpose is a little unique with your execution. Well done

    Ch 13 Prodigal son part 2
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    RJTWRITER3mth
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    "Contingency Zero: The Dark Knight" The robotic voice of the android once more rang out "The Failsafe"
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    RJTWRITER3mth
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    An Android, darker and sharper than even one of his own suits, a glowing red visor staring him down as it landed with little effort, cracking the concrete of the wall ramparts beneath it. It looked like the very fears he had struck into the hearts of Gotham's criminals had come for him
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    RJTWRITER3mth
    Commented

    This is a fascinating story. I love the character you are crafting with Failsafe. How interesting if the robot eventually decides to eliminate batman's opponents because it knows batman won't do what needs to be done, and in a twist also keeps its creator safe from crossing the line?

    Ch 7 Entombed
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER3mth
    Commented

    Jim is short for James, I probably should just change it to his nickname to prevent confusion.

    *James Gordon, GCPD Headquarters, rooftop, 12 A.M.
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER3mth
    Replied to _ASURA_2414_

    Secret twist! lol

    He always remembers feeling angry. Even at a young age as a toddler, he felt anger at everything. Perhaps it was due to the lack of his parents, their deaths? Maybe it was genetic, or maybe he was really just an irritable person.
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    RJTWRITER3mth
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    Thanks for updating so frequently, this is a great story.

    Ch 263 Chapter 341 The Soviet-Finnish War (10)
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER3mth
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    New Cover.
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER3mth
    Commented

    Someone put out the idea that Harry jumps in to help heal him. It is an interesting idea to one make Harry stand out positively for healing someone, though it could also be bad if he is question how he knows how to heal such wounds, exspecially if its a dark curse Neville flung. One way or another I do hope we get more of Cassius, could be a good ally for harry. Final thought is if he does die then Neville's reputation is either completely ruined or I call bs. It is one thing to argue in defense of Neville when he is flinging curses, it is completely another when he is flinging curses and kills someone who used light spells and stunning spells. Either Dumbledore realistically would need to cut his losses with the BWL or ruin his reputation completely which seems a little crazy.

    Ch 186 Chapter 186: Circular Reasoning 
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER3mth
    Commented

    Thank you for updating, a great series.

    Ch 229 Chapter 307 Patriots
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER3mth
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    Lol, you are probs right. So many times have I stopped and realized the chronology of events is scattered everywhere. Thanks for your patience.

    Batman nodded, "Some trouble with trainees in Washington, apparently, they stumbled upon an illegal lab and some clone experiments... another standard day for the league I suppose."
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER3mth
    Replied to NikTB

    Thank you, lots to still improve on but it has been fun.

    Ch 44 CHAPTER 43: "Don't Be A Fool..."
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER4mth
    Commented

    Ha ha ha... we are all in danger

    Time until Ascension, 4 Hours 23 minutes...
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  • RJTWRITER
    RJTWRITER4mth
    Replied to Stardragon

    lol

    Nodding the reporter said, "It has been confirmed that a GCPD Officer has been killed in the line of duty. The officer's name was Benjamin Montoya, officer Montoya is survived by his 2 children and sister another GCPD officer..."
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    RJTWRITER4mth
    Replied to Firefly4545

    Secrets don't stay secret forever, will need to grab some popcorn for the drama these idiots will find themselves in.

    Leaning back in the cockpit she continued to smile lightly. It was nice to have something in her life that was simple, and completely normal...
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