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Atimo

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  • Atimo
    Atimo3mth
    Commented

    Why would a teenager live alone in a different city/state far away from his family? A very strange story setting! And the setup is lacking

    My family resided in Chicago, miles away from New York. My father, an electrician at a local factory, bore the brunt of our financial responsibilities.
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    The Evolution of Genius: Every Night, I Get Smarter!
    Urban · WorldScholar
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  • Atimo
    Atimo6mth
    Replied to Lipovitan

    I second that!

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    Worldwide Hunger: I Can Fuse My Items
    Sci-fi · Men's Not Hot
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  • Atimo
    Atimo7mth
    Posted

    One of the best works on WN in my opinion.

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    Cultivation: Start From Simplifying Martial Arts Techniques
    Eastern · Eat More Fish
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  • Atimo
    Atimo7mth
    Commented

    Doesn’t reflect years of experience as military personnel!

    Frustrated, Alex exclaimed, "You haven't even told me what is on the flash drive, and what do you mean by the world being in danger?" But there was no response, only silence.
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    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Atimo
    Atimo7mth
    Commented

    I thought that was the ring function?!

    This was good because he was no longer afraid of turning into a maniac who slaughters for fun, and such an instinct was suppressed by calming his mind and emotions.
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    In Another World with My Wooden Throne System
    Fantasy · Night_of_Dreams
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  • Atimo
    Atimo10mth
    Replied to QuantumVoid

    Chapter 28, skipped few chapters. Good luck!

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    The WealthTap System: Rising from Rags to Riches
    Urban · QuantumVoid
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  • Atimo
    Atimo10mth
    Replied to QuantumVoid

    I am being very sincere when I say interesting core idea, but I couldn’t continue reading after few chapters because it is poorly executed in my opinion. It can be better so please do your best to improve the writing to be less cheesy.

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    The WealthTap System: Rising from Rags to Riches
    Urban · QuantumVoid
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  • Atimo
    Atimo1yr
    Replied to Herolich

    First, good work and keep going. The start seems promising and well written I guess. Second, since it is unclear how you will steer your story, I can only say I think Luna so far more troublesome than being useful asset to the MC for being impassive and childish. Generally I avoid "Harem" and "Comedy" because it is clichéd! Good luck! (^.^ `)

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