I did enjoy the first few chapters. They were definitely intense and interesting, it already made for a great mystery. It did have a bunch of grammatical errors, but that aside, it's still a good read 👌

Thank you so much for your lovely comment! It makes my heart happy to see you enjoy these two chapters, despite it not being your usual go-to genre. I hope that you'll continue to follow and enjoy our future chapters even more 🙏

When it comes to love, some people can do or believe the craziest things

Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment! While yes, there will be some mentions about ballet or Adele's ballerina past here and there, it will not be a focus on this story, since her goal in this world will be very different from her goals in her original world. It's completely fine too if you're unfamiliar with the story of Swan Lake, since you could learn it as we go on 😊 That, or you could just read my synopsis, and you'll pretty much get the gist of the original story.

That's good to hear! I really wanted to convey the sisterly relationship between these two despite their brief scene. I'm glad Adele came across as believable for you 👌

Thank you 🙏 I'm usually not very confident about my descriptions, but I'm glad this one turned out just fine

Very true 👌 But this is one of the first times that Adele had ever stood up for herself, since she's always been ignored. So that rush of adrenaline definitely clouded her rationality for a bit 😅

I'll keep that in mind, thank you 👌

She is both 😊

I like how intriguing the ending was in this chapter. I want to point out that there are some grammatical errors that could be found, while some sentences ran a little longer than neccessary. Some sentences also had a confusing mixture of past and present tense, even though it's supposed to be in the same scene. But storywise, I'd love to find out more!

The main protagonist has been enjoyable so far. I appreciate his positive outlook with life, but also the humorous ways he deals with pompous characters. I will say though that I personally felt that chapter 1 had a little too much narration. I would've loved to see more "showing" instead of "telling", in a way that allows us to witness Kaiden's specific interactions with each of the kids in the orphanage to put him in a more sympathetic light, instead of just one small interaction. But overall, so far these chapters were intriguing! Keep it up author 👌

I don't know why I imagined Argos to look like Henry Henderson from Spy X Family 😂 And then the blonde seatmate I'd imagine would look like a richer version of Ryuji from Persona 5. That aside, I am enjoying Kaiden's personality so far!

While the FL can be quite unlikeable at times with her slight victim mentality, I can't deny that her antics and unexpected responses are really entertaining to read 😂 She's definitely perfect for someone like ML

Uhhhh ... and so???

Pretty much all the typical Chinese Cinderella tropes are here ... But I'm still gonna continue to read this anyway!

And the Father Of The Year award goes to...

Oh. No wonder she hates FL. This was all her dad's fault for not keeping it in his pants

Why is she blaming him??? You DRUGGED him!

I mean, you could always look for a different career path. Being an actress isn't everything