They must suffer severe consequences for violating the Codes of War. It is necessary to make of these kingdoms a real example of what will happen if they violate the same established rules of warfare

I think this is the best chapter. Awareness, acceptance, firmness, loyalty to your goals and ambitions. In this chapter, Tai Lung really understands his personality and nature. It is sometimes difficult for people to understand simple things, but it is through difficulties and mistakes that we understand the true nature of our Self. Most people want to be someone they are not and continue to live that way. Few are ready to accept their nature and be themselves.

The author is a thief. This work was already published and completed on Ao3 two years ago. It's called "Dragon's Roar" and it's by Spectr4hire. And other works also already exist. I don’t recommend reading from a person who makes money on Patreon from someone else’s work

Good job! The character feels alive. One of the best fanfictions for this manga. And most importantly, this is the first time I’ve read such a work, which describes events before the Canon.

I read the first six chapters and there is simply no point in reading further. The author indicated that his date would be Jin Ah, but made his character look like a deceitful stalker. You have shown that your hero is not a person who is distant from society and the obvious communication with Han Song Yi shows that they may not be best friends, but acquaintances. Considering this, he must be more or less familiar with Jin Ah, which did not prevent him from starting to get closer in the school atmosphere, and the author began getting closer with stalking and deception. If Jin Ah wants to meet his "adoptive parents and uncle", what will he say? “Sorry, I have a hard time with them” or other nonsense will be uttered throughout the entire fanfic. He literally trained near the Higher Beings under the supervision of the Goddess, he seemed to have lost his mind and his iq clearly became lower since getting closer to Jin Ah in this way. Clearly the author shows that his character doesn’t care about her. Considering the situation Jin Ah is in, a deceitful stalker falls on her head, as if the world has decided to mock her in this way again. The person literally lost her father at the gate, her mother was in hibernation, her brother was on the verge of death every day, and then some bastard decided to attract her attention with his deception.