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capitalism in a nutshell dont save people because its bad for the economy...
it is above average so it's good, the main problem to me is that you don't explain enough the context, why is this girl spying on mizuki, how mizuki figured it out even the the way it get ride of the bug. The same with his fishes i dont get how he made them and for what purpose. It might be the fact that im not native english but i think if you take more time to present the situation maybe in third pov it can be better. Voila just my opinion i hope you continue you story tho its nice to read.