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    JsemirY24d
    Commented
    Ch 45 Chapter 45 Tony’s Email
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    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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    JsemirY1mth
    Commented

    yes

    MC doesn't get Spider powers and focuses on his system
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    Marvel: Tech System
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    JsemirY1mth
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    Marvel: Tech System
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    JsemirY1mth
    Commented
    Ch 94 Akira Toriyama - Sayonara
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    To Go Even Further Beyond (Dragon Ball Z)
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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    JsemirY1mth
    Commented

    the power he gets through coumpound V should be RANDOM !

    Ch 16 Chapter 16 NZT
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    Marvel: Tech System
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    JsemirY1mth
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    JsemirY4mth
    Replied to tALvaNCH

    Worse than Cersei ?🤨

    Ch 58 The Morality of Prescience
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • JsemirY
    JsemirY5mth
    Posted

    So far so good, goes a little too fast, need character development and more dialogue maybe, we didnt see the MC interact much with other character yet he become close with them anyway like with Laura Keep pushing forward

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    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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    JsemirY8mth
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    'Uncle?!?!?!?!?!? What the Fuck!' Jerry was barely able kept his dead act together at that moment!
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    Marvel: I Need A New Body
    Anime & Comics · Marveller
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  • JsemirY
    JsemirY8mth
    Commented

    capitalism in a nutshell dont save people because its bad for the economy...

    Think about it, if someone came up with a medicine that cures all diseases, the first thought for anyone is, that'd be great. But if you think deeper you'll see how devastating it would be for the economy. Everyone in healthcare-related jobs would suddenly become jobless and the whole economy would crash."
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    MARVEL: Scientific Path
    Anime & Comics · PyteWriter
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    JsemirY10mth
    Commented

    kill him !

    Revenge or justice?
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • JsemirY
    JsemirY1yr
    Commented

    it is above average so it's good, the main problem to me is that you don't explain enough the context, why is this girl spying on mizuki, how mizuki figured it out even the the way it get ride of the bug. The same with his fishes i dont get how he made them and for what purpose. It might be the fact that im not native english but i think if you take more time to present the situation maybe in third pov it can be better. Voila just my opinion i hope you continue you story tho its nice to read.

    Ch 11 Author's note
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    Naruto : Mizuki Reborn
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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