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david_mckelvey

david_mckelvey

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2022-03-02 JoinedGlobal
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  • david_mckelvey
    david_mckelvey28d
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    So the story looked good, but after reading 40+ chapters, it is basically just plagiarizing 3 different stories. Like straight up borderline word for word. The premise was there for a good story but with so much plagiarism i just couldn't continue.

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    Reborn: Rise of the Greatest Summoner
    Fantasy · GREAT
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  • david_mckelvey
    david_mckelvey1mth
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    I don't know if it gets better, but so far, the story has little to no explanation. Things just happen with no back story. Seems really rushed.

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    I Farm Demons : Unholy Necromancer In the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Yonaas
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  • david_mckelvey
    david_mckelvey4mth
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    First of all I would like to say that the story has a lot of potential. It is very interesting. However, the leveling system and the mc talent has far too many holes. Multiple mistakes when combining either skills or equipment. The experience is also extremely flawed and has no logic whatsoever behind it. I would suggest that the author find someone to edit their writings before posting.

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    Talent Awakening: I, the Weakest Awakened, Start with Dragonfire Spell
    Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
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  • david_mckelvey
    david_mckelvey5mth
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    Terrible translation, it seems like someone just put it through a translator and said no to proofreading. It seems like a wonderful story, but after reading 300 chapters with no improvement in quality, I am giving up reading it.

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    My Genes Can Evolve Limitlessly
    Eastern · Blue Sky Washing Rain
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