Its ok, one epic moment and a lot of backgrouns, background and background. I fell that the characters lack a bit, i.e I get the sense that I can predict what is gonna happen... like a character will be used at this moment (fee pages, arcs) and killed, forgotten or whatever. There is no "big plot" happening which is sad...

Why you put so much information before two or three dialogues even happen, e.g after the first dialog of the Purple Mist. It feels out of the flow sometimes, I noticed it in the last two chapters. Either way I like your writing style.

This doesn't make sense, didn't Arthur had an A.I that scanned all his memories? Why his insight is shown as if he just remembered a thing, while he could get information at any time using the A.I?